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1 Water lilies remembered her as one of them, lotus buds nodded, jealousy set  thick in their eyes her fingers were white lily buds she balanced on the big, smooth, round pebble stones, like a danseuse in an under water ballet,you are buoyant here than anywhere, as if you live a life after death your bodies pale and water caressed, create an illusion of 'unliving' 2. she tickled my skin- goosebumps  appeared allover as small bubbles going up..up till they burst above water I can't forget her first  kiss , underwater my lungs were filled with her feminine fragrance like  smoke of cannabis an experience that sizzled the water, never to forget (even if she would never come back from the unfathomable  love, water gives)                                          3                     I was naked, she too, like a lily in bloom that was raveling in love                     as if it was the last season we had                     she was magic in body and soul                     I peeped in to the limitless with her entangling me and at the end,                    I saw  halo around her pointed  *******                    that have become lotus buds.                    I couldn't take my eyes off them after the magical transformation.                    The lake was totally out of the world                     the mossy patch between her legs                    had a fluorescent glow intermittent,                    she was transforming every minute in to  a form of water life, I understood.                    like a fish, coral, moss or water plant                    I , for my dismay remained as before; nothing was to be done about it,                    like many of the things brought change in a person's life.                                              4.                                                       Sun, in the voice of light                                                       called us from above,                                                       his pranks tickled her and me                                                        like ghosts of dead women,                                                         found their watery grave here,                                                        we played with tortoises and frogs                                                        made for us crowns with algae and water flowers.                                                                            5                                                        A silvery  snake, thin, with some intent                                                        coiled around her narrow waist.                                                        eyes in its sharp pointed head,                                                       intently looked in to mine.                                                       she was  now a dolphin without fins                                                        then,  I received waves of clear foreboding                                                        time to return to the shores, I tried to tell                                                       but massive sheets of water ate my muffled words!                                                       Swimming up a water column, she smiled that detached smile                                                       already, she was a mermaid , I could see                                                       I stammered"You..promised..                                                                              to come back..                                                                              we have promises to keep,                                                                              that we exchanged..."                                                       Under water time runs in a way we can't understand                                                       one becomes a flow, one with altered time..                                                        she was just a glow in the depth when I saw her last.                                                           O
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Dec 7, 2011
Dec 7, 2011 at 1:33 PM UTC
Love life underwater
1 Water lilies remembered her as one of them, lotus buds nodded, jealousy set  thick in their eyes her fingers were white lily buds she balanced on the big, smooth, round pebble stones, like a danseuse in an under water ballet,you are buoyant here than anywhere, as if you live a life after death your bodies pale and water caressed, create an illusion of 'unliving' 2. she tickled my skin- goosebumps  appeared allover as small bubbles going up..up till they burst above water I can't forget her first  kiss , underwater my lungs were filled with her feminine fragrance like  smoke of cannabis an experience that sizzled the water, never to forget (even if she would never come back from the unfathomable  love, water gives)                                          3                     I was naked, she too, like a lily in bloom that was raveling in love                     as if it was the last season we had                     she was magic in body and soul                     I peeped in to the limitless with her entangling me and at the end,                    I saw  halo around her pointed  *******                    that have become lotus buds.                    I couldn't take my eyes off them after the magical transformation.                    The lake was totally out of the world                     the mossy patch between her legs                    had a fluorescent glow intermittent,                    she was transforming every minute in to  a form of water life, I understood.                    like a fish, coral, moss or water plant                    I , for my dismay remained as before; nothing was to be done about it,                    like many of the things brought change in a person's life.                                              4.                                                       Sun, in the voice of light                                                       called us from above,                                                       his pranks tickled her and me                                                        like ghosts of dead women,                                                         found their watery grave here,                                                        we played with tortoises and frogs                                                        made for us crowns with algae and water flowers.                                                                            5                                                        A silvery  snake, thin, with some intent                                                        coiled around her narrow waist.                                                        eyes in its sharp pointed head,                                                       intently looked in to mine.                                                       she was  now a dolphin without fins                                                        then,  I received waves of clear foreboding                                                        time to return to the shores, I tried to tell                                                       but massive sheets of water ate my muffled words!                                                       Swimming up a water column, she smiled that detached smile                                                       already, she was a mermaid , I could see                                                       I stammered"You..promised..                                                                              to come back..                                                                              we have promises to keep,                                                                              that we exchanged..."                                                       Under water time runs in a way we can't understand                                                       one becomes a flow, one with altered time..                                                        she was just a glow in the depth when I saw her last.                                                           O
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Dec 7, 2011 at 1:33 PM UTC
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