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She was Old Man River Could I keep up? Elle a été au-delà de ma portée Could I touch the sun? Notice the tense of my writing? At the moment we travel an untouched Road just we two, with the present time And memories of the moment that I Dared to touch the her burning star. And we're looking forward to a future of Many things that have gathered dust. Where we thrive in engaging with The forgotten, and the unlearned things Of the unconquered hearts love.
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Feb 1, 2016
Feb 1, 2016 at 11:10 PM UTC
At the Moment.
She was Old Man River Could I keep up? Elle a été au-delà de ma portée Could I touch the sun? Notice the tense of my writing? At the moment we travel an untouched Road just we two, with the present time And memories of the moment that I Dared to touch the her burning star. And we're looking forward to a future of Many things that have gathered dust. Where we thrive in engaging with The forgotten, and the unlearned things Of the unconquered hearts love.
I wish I could speak French. Feels a little wrong using it without actually knowing the language but it helps.that I've written poems like this before. Poems with another language that is. Anyways, let me know what you think please!!
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Feb 1, 2016
Feb 1, 2016 at 11:10 PM UTC
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