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My empty heartbeat vs. hers Close your eyes. Breathe deeply. Lying-so-still, delicately yet deliberately holding each other. It's a subdued quiet, as if we are both asleep. I wish-he thought. I can't-she thought. Let's just wait. Let's just lay. Okay? Okay. think-- but stay surfaced. I know-he thought I don't know-she thought. Maybe? Maybe. The smells intrigue both- The situation intrigues both- Is this real?-he thought. Is this real?-she thought.
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Feb 5, 2010
Feb 5, 2010 at 9:36 PM UTC
October 2, 2009
My empty heartbeat vs. hers Close your eyes. Breathe deeply. Lying-so-still, delicately yet deliberately holding each other. It's a subdued quiet, as if we are both asleep. I wish-he thought. I can't-she thought. Let's just wait. Let's just lay. Okay? Okay. think-- but stay surfaced. I know-he thought I don't know-she thought. Maybe? Maybe. The smells intrigue both- The situation intrigues both- Is this real?-he thought. Is this real?-she thought.
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Feb 5, 2010
Feb 5, 2010 at 9:36 PM UTC
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