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Years had past since PTD's cases, all was now Play and fun. But the little man missed The chase of what could be found Mysteries, Riddles, Enigmas Of what was hidden from view. He was A bright young fellow now Six years old. Words are longer as gurgles faded into Memories past thoughts. He had come Home to mummy, "How's my little man, "I have a loose toothy peg Mummy, "Well no playing, "As we don't want it lost for the tooth fairy, So little man played with his cars "Brummmm, Brrruuumm, Screecchhhh, "That was close the baddies nearly caught us, He played till it started to get dark, then heard His mummy calling from down stairs. "Little man time to get ready for bed sweet heart, "Ok mummy I'm changing now, A jumper did fly socks also too, Trousers flew in the air landing waist Side up on his head too. Jester Clown Fun Times of an imagination as he runs around. But in to jimjams he must now do, his favourite ones were Captain Carrot Space Ranger. He has all the books reading them to sleep His favourite story before he slumbers in to dreams. ~Captain Carrots Space Race~ *Trix sat in his comfy seat, his friends All waiting for his words of as the race was Set in the dust nebula* Atria *Its dark in space only stars glitter. But in the dust cloud it was like rainbows blossomed A light show of the universal beauty.* Right my fluffiest friends its time to launch.        3   2 1 *Rockets ignited and away they went, Captain Trix was nibbling on a cucumber stick. Then from no where the naughty*  Cat Captain Frost *Bashed and knocked at their ship, and off the Race course they fell. They tumbled into a pocket of* Darkest space. Captain its  dark  *in here, the lights Faded and all was dark.*  Trix  could hear teeth chattering. *Be calm my friends, there is nothing scary in the shadows. Take out your carrot coins, and nibble, chew, And with that, once finger licked and all was chomped All that was heard was trix voice, right can we all See? yes captain carrot vison is a go.* *They set a course out of this darkest place and Out they popped into normal space, colours gleamed As they saw they were in last place. Rockets burst into action and they flew in And out, weaving through the clouds One pasted, two pasted, three pasted Now they were in second place.* Who should be in first place naughty  Captain Frost *He had a coat as white as snow. but that was As far as his niceness did go. He was a naughty Kitty and everyone did know. Sir he is blocking our path, we cant get through Ok secret decoy time fluffy friends.*            3      2 1 *Cats attention set adrift sir, and into space it wondered, In sight of Captain Frosts view. Out came the holding Claws, and the space wool did bobble and excitement Was the pleasure of kitties day. While they entertained Themselves, Captain Trix did glide on past. Full speed ahead as they race past the finish line.* Yawns were the calling of the night as the story Ended as eyes blinked soon to be shut "Mummy Captain Carrot [Trix] won the race, "Yes he did darling and that's why meanies are always last, "Sweet dreams my baby now off to sleep, The night drew on as eyes slept through, and little Mans dreams were of carrots and rabbits That whizzed through the night sky, ZOOM. Morning broke through his curtains and Yawns did come and go. Slippers were On as cold it felt, and downstairs He wondered dressing gown and all. "Mummy what's for breakfast? "Was that me Mummy? "Open wide little man, goodness me...., "There is a gap where there should be a tooth? "O' no I have a missing toothy peg, ***** trained detective is on the case,* "I think I may need a new name? "Junior Trained Detective, "No that's not right does ring true? "Buddy The Trained Detective. "That's the nickname you gave me mummy, "That's excellent little man, I love your choice, His mummy smiles and gives him a hug and Kisses his forehead, they search under his pillow "Nope? Mmmm... may have to get out the cap And magnifying glass -o "Mummy this is too small for me? "Don't worry little man I thought this day may come, Out of a box she pulls his new hat out, he tries it On, perfectly it fits on his head and his detective Days have started again. Fist my bedroom under The pillow I will seek my tooth be it here or there. But pillow case removed quilt removed o' so slowly For a tooth we don't want to lose it, but nothing appeared. "One place now searched with a keen eye, "Now so many other places for it to hide, He thought of where a tooth would place hide and Seek from its home in the mouth, under the Bed he thought.Torch in hand he wiggled under The wooden from and what we he see but his Car that vanished quite a while ago, I wondered Where that went? a sweet, a pen, a coin for the piggybank. "Mummy its not under or over the bed, "I looked hard, but no where can it be found, Little man was frustrated at the thought that the Tooth fairy would not be rewarded with a tooth. Right let me think? he thought of that night, it Was their in bed, when story time was read. It was their when mummy give him a kiss goodnight. In the morning it was gone "Captain Carrot, "Trix where are you, This is no time for hide and seek, He found him tucked in his quilt, sleeping soundly. "There you are sorry to wake you, He looked in his hair "Nope not there, Looked in his tail it was white and fluffy "Nope not there, He thought once again? if he were Captain Carrot where would he keep his Best friends tooth safe if it feel out in dreamy sleep. A smile etched across Buddies face at the thought of Where he would keep it safe for him. In his little fingers did search around, and then A little white rock, no a tooth was found. Captain Trix had kept it safe in his uniform pocket. "Mummy, mummy, "The case Is solved I found my tooth, "Detective work solves a puzzling case again, "Where was it my little man? "Captain Carrot had it snuggly warm in his space rucksack, "That's fantastic, "Now where does a tooth now found go, She smiles rubbing his hair, off to his bedroom He runs tooth proudly in hand. Lifting his pillow he gently places it with pride In the place where the tooth fairy could easily Reach and find. Leaving a special present for this Little boy who had found his missing toothy peg. "I think I may keep this cap, "Let Buddy the trained detective solve cases again soon,
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Feb 11, 2016
Feb 11, 2016 at 9:40 AM UTC
***** Trained Detective (The Missing Toothy Peg)
Years had past since PTD's cases, all was now Play and fun. But the little man missed The chase of what could be found Mysteries, Riddles, Enigmas Of what was hidden from view. He was A bright young fellow now Six years old. Words are longer as gurgles faded into Memories past thoughts. He had come Home to mummy, "How's my little man, "I have a loose toothy peg Mummy, "Well no playing, "As we don't want it lost for the tooth fairy, So little man played with his cars "Brummmm, Brrruuumm, Screecchhhh, "That was close the baddies nearly caught us, He played till it started to get dark, then heard His mummy calling from down stairs. "Little man time to get ready for bed sweet heart, "Ok mummy I'm changing now, A jumper did fly socks also too, Trousers flew in the air landing waist Side up on his head too. Jester Clown Fun Times of an imagination as he runs around. But in to jimjams he must now do, his favourite ones were Captain Carrot Space Ranger. He has all the books reading them to sleep His favourite story before he slumbers in to dreams. ~Captain Carrots Space Race~ *Trix sat in his comfy seat, his friends All waiting for his words of as the race was Set in the dust nebula* Atria *Its dark in space only stars glitter. But in the dust cloud it was like rainbows blossomed A light show of the universal beauty.* Right my fluffiest friends its time to launch.        3   2 1 *Rockets ignited and away they went, Captain Trix was nibbling on a cucumber stick. Then from no where the naughty*  Cat Captain Frost *Bashed and knocked at their ship, and off the Race course they fell. They tumbled into a pocket of* Darkest space. Captain its  dark  *in here, the lights Faded and all was dark.*  Trix  could hear teeth chattering. *Be calm my friends, there is nothing scary in the shadows. Take out your carrot coins, and nibble, chew, And with that, once finger licked and all was chomped All that was heard was trix voice, right can we all See? yes captain carrot vison is a go.* *They set a course out of this darkest place and Out they popped into normal space, colours gleamed As they saw they were in last place. Rockets burst into action and they flew in And out, weaving through the clouds One pasted, two pasted, three pasted Now they were in second place.* Who should be in first place naughty  Captain Frost *He had a coat as white as snow. but that was As far as his niceness did go. He was a naughty Kitty and everyone did know. Sir he is blocking our path, we cant get through Ok secret decoy time fluffy friends.*            3      2 1 *Cats attention set adrift sir, and into space it wondered, In sight of Captain Frosts view. Out came the holding Claws, and the space wool did bobble and excitement Was the pleasure of kitties day. While they entertained Themselves, Captain Trix did glide on past. Full speed ahead as they race past the finish line.* Yawns were the calling of the night as the story Ended as eyes blinked soon to be shut "Mummy Captain Carrot [Trix] won the race, "Yes he did darling and that's why meanies are always last, "Sweet dreams my baby now off to sleep, The night drew on as eyes slept through, and little Mans dreams were of carrots and rabbits That whizzed through the night sky, ZOOM. Morning broke through his curtains and Yawns did come and go. Slippers were On as cold it felt, and downstairs He wondered dressing gown and all. "Mummy what's for breakfast? "Was that me Mummy? "Open wide little man, goodness me...., "There is a gap where there should be a tooth? "O' no I have a missing toothy peg, ***** trained detective is on the case,* "I think I may need a new name? "Junior Trained Detective, "No that's not right does ring true? "Buddy The Trained Detective. "That's the nickname you gave me mummy, "That's excellent little man, I love your choice, His mummy smiles and gives him a hug and Kisses his forehead, they search under his pillow "Nope? Mmmm... may have to get out the cap And magnifying glass -o "Mummy this is too small for me? "Don't worry little man I thought this day may come, Out of a box she pulls his new hat out, he tries it On, perfectly it fits on his head and his detective Days have started again. Fist my bedroom under The pillow I will seek my tooth be it here or there. But pillow case removed quilt removed o' so slowly For a tooth we don't want to lose it, but nothing appeared. "One place now searched with a keen eye, "Now so many other places for it to hide, He thought of where a tooth would place hide and Seek from its home in the mouth, under the Bed he thought.Torch in hand he wiggled under The wooden from and what we he see but his Car that vanished quite a while ago, I wondered Where that went? a sweet, a pen, a coin for the piggybank. "Mummy its not under or over the bed, "I looked hard, but no where can it be found, Little man was frustrated at the thought that the Tooth fairy would not be rewarded with a tooth. Right let me think? he thought of that night, it Was their in bed, when story time was read. It was their when mummy give him a kiss goodnight. In the morning it was gone "Captain Carrot, "Trix where are you, This is no time for hide and seek, He found him tucked in his quilt, sleeping soundly. "There you are sorry to wake you, He looked in his hair "Nope not there, Looked in his tail it was white and fluffy "Nope not there, He thought once again? if he were Captain Carrot where would he keep his Best friends tooth safe if it feel out in dreamy sleep. A smile etched across Buddies face at the thought of Where he would keep it safe for him. In his little fingers did search around, and then A little white rock, no a tooth was found. Captain Trix had kept it safe in his uniform pocket. "Mummy, mummy, "The case Is solved I found my tooth, "Detective work solves a puzzling case again, "Where was it my little man? "Captain Carrot had it snuggly warm in his space rucksack, "That's fantastic, "Now where does a tooth now found go, She smiles rubbing his hair, off to his bedroom He runs tooth proudly in hand. Lifting his pillow he gently places it with pride In the place where the tooth fairy could easily Reach and find. Leaving a special present for this Little boy who had found his missing toothy peg. "I think I may keep this cap, "Let Buddy the trained detective solve cases again soon,
these are the first two writes 1. http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1109468/ptd-potty-trained-detective/ 2. http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1116359/potty-trained-detective-the-missing-blanky/
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