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When, torpid, the sun begins to grey In the outlines of clouds on the move But in no hurry, autumn reaches for its full potential. What leaves there could have been Were shot away, we’d have paid them no mind, anyway. There is a roughness tangled in your hair, It’s best, I think, to let it be And, instead, to view the wide expanse of beach, Which marches into the frigid sea, Debating with itself and at last achieving a landscape Pure enough to match the temperature: 40 degrees F. I can feel your hand stiffen and I Too sense the tension in the afternoon, A resistance to our huddled, timid presence; we’re nearly frozen in the process. Drawing closer, hoods, tightening our jackets Won’t do much to prevent the Days from shortening and the hours’ agonizing stretching- Out. It’s not time enough To take in the red and white display Which umbrella shades act out tiredly before us. Then the waves, mischievous as ever, Creep up the sand to ****** at our shoes Before they swagger back to the sea. Love Is lounging in the break, sopping wet And fully-clothed—boots and all. In the brief moments when our thoughts and talk collide, hours fit for memory Flit us by. Hairy swathes of weedy dunegrass Wilt with hindsight. Please, slow. A rushed gaze and a blink are futility At the shore; looking, here, Is tenderer than you’d imagine. Finalized versions of the day are worth one short glance, But no more than that; you see Too many things are Strewn about these days; it is unclear who is At fault for these mysteries, only that today, At the boardwalk there are many brooding melancholies. Silently, a hard wind licks the sand.
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Feb 5, 2010
Feb 5, 2010 at 12:15 PM UTC
October Beach
When, torpid, the sun begins to grey In the outlines of clouds on the move But in no hurry, autumn reaches for its full potential. What leaves there could have been Were shot away, we’d have paid them no mind, anyway. There is a roughness tangled in your hair, It’s best, I think, to let it be And, instead, to view the wide expanse of beach, Which marches into the frigid sea, Debating with itself and at last achieving a landscape Pure enough to match the temperature: 40 degrees F. I can feel your hand stiffen and I Too sense the tension in the afternoon, A resistance to our huddled, timid presence; we’re nearly frozen in the process. Drawing closer, hoods, tightening our jackets Won’t do much to prevent the Days from shortening and the hours’ agonizing stretching- Out. It’s not time enough To take in the red and white display Which umbrella shades act out tiredly before us. Then the waves, mischievous as ever, Creep up the sand to ****** at our shoes Before they swagger back to the sea. Love Is lounging in the break, sopping wet And fully-clothed—boots and all. In the brief moments when our thoughts and talk collide, hours fit for memory Flit us by. Hairy swathes of weedy dunegrass Wilt with hindsight. Please, slow. A rushed gaze and a blink are futility At the shore; looking, here, Is tenderer than you’d imagine. Finalized versions of the day are worth one short glance, But no more than that; you see Too many things are Strewn about these days; it is unclear who is At fault for these mysteries, only that today, At the boardwalk there are many brooding melancholies. Silently, a hard wind licks the sand.
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Feb 5, 2010
Feb 5, 2010 at 12:15 PM UTC
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