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I stand still to think one day "Am I dreaming?" This question irks my illuminant soul. Quickly, I pinch myself I feel no pain, no sorrow, no joy. An emptiness consumes me. In the depths of mind I wander around slowing creating a world which does not exist. A world full of chaos and peace. In a flow the ocean crashes against the giant skies. My world is unstable unending unbearable to those who enter the caves of my mind. Wandering wishless in a world of my creation I put this question forth to you "Are you sure you're awake?"
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Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 10:24 PM UTC
Ocean Question
I stand still to think one day "Am I dreaming?" This question irks my illuminant soul. Quickly, I pinch myself I feel no pain, no sorrow, no joy. An emptiness consumes me. In the depths of mind I wander around slowing creating a world which does not exist. A world full of chaos and peace. In a flow the ocean crashes against the giant skies. My world is unstable unending unbearable to those who enter the caves of my mind. Wandering wishless in a world of my creation I put this question forth to you "Are you sure you're awake?"
joshwithapen
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32/M/Mexican
Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 10:24 PM UTC
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