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You came in and abruptly fit, Making the candles all lit; Sharing your inner wits, A bit like my first aid kit. I'd loved you much, Like a child of my future; Your goods and bad and such, Enlightening me on being mature. But perhaps we didn't have An actual camaraderie. Incompatibilities, My free wills and your austerity; My acerbity, and your hesitancy. Your capriciousness and your harshness is too much to take, even for my own sake. It's such a paradox of me to give up on people, but there's a wisdom I've yet to see, surely in all of this there's a couple.
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Jan 24, 2016
Jan 24, 2016 at 1:44 AM UTC
Acquiescence
You came in and abruptly fit, Making the candles all lit; Sharing your inner wits, A bit like my first aid kit. I'd loved you much, Like a child of my future; Your goods and bad and such, Enlightening me on being mature. But perhaps we didn't have An actual camaraderie. Incompatibilities, My free wills and your austerity; My acerbity, and your hesitancy. Your capriciousness and your harshness is too much to take, even for my own sake. It's such a paradox of me to give up on people, but there's a wisdom I've yet to see, surely in all of this there's a couple.
For Sham, whom I thought would be my friend till I grow old.
amilah-marzuki
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Jan 24, 2016
Jan 24, 2016 at 1:44 AM UTC
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