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She takes a breath; A big one-- The kind that lifts her chest Reaches her stomach. She holds herself, Steady little birdy, 5, 6, 7, 8... Then unleashes All of her raw wild grace; As they sit in awe Of the most beautiful animal She brings before them. She embodies the maelstroms, The typhoons, the hurricanes, That have destroyed so many, As she devastates her audience In subliminal bliss. She is purely a creature of light; A force of nature, so absolute, So fragile; She could break herself, Have the world shatter In but a flex... The melody Of her expression will run out soon. As the last few bars thunder down, She recedes; Her energy smashed And scattered With those who saw her When she was in her space, Where they could not touch her Or her spirit. They were helpless in the face Of her fire-- So hot, so bright, It blazed in the brilliance Of a thousand suns, Before the last flame of the candle Lost it's light... Not with a bang, but a whimper A coldness takes hold, She realizes she has to come back To their world. She will miss Her own little dimension Where she is Queen; Her space where she can fly, Where she can move mountains, And reign over thunderstorms... The curtains start to draw As she prepares to leave the stage, Taking hold of the memories made Only to be forgotten and remembered; Thinking of her time in the sun, She takes a last breath And bows out. Her grace, now a dim memory Forgotten, only to be remembered In these eternal phrases, When you read them.
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Jan 22, 2016
Jan 22, 2016 at 3:18 PM UTC
Not with a bang, but a whimper
She takes a breath; A big one-- The kind that lifts her chest Reaches her stomach. She holds herself, Steady little birdy, 5, 6, 7, 8... Then unleashes All of her raw wild grace; As they sit in awe Of the most beautiful animal She brings before them. She embodies the maelstroms, The typhoons, the hurricanes, That have destroyed so many, As she devastates her audience In subliminal bliss. She is purely a creature of light; A force of nature, so absolute, So fragile; She could break herself, Have the world shatter In but a flex... The melody Of her expression will run out soon. As the last few bars thunder down, She recedes; Her energy smashed And scattered With those who saw her When she was in her space, Where they could not touch her Or her spirit. They were helpless in the face Of her fire-- So hot, so bright, It blazed in the brilliance Of a thousand suns, Before the last flame of the candle Lost it's light... Not with a bang, but a whimper A coldness takes hold, She realizes she has to come back To their world. She will miss Her own little dimension Where she is Queen; Her space where she can fly, Where she can move mountains, And reign over thunderstorms... The curtains start to draw As she prepares to leave the stage, Taking hold of the memories made Only to be forgotten and remembered; Thinking of her time in the sun, She takes a last breath And bows out. Her grace, now a dim memory Forgotten, only to be remembered In these eternal phrases, When you read them.
shruti-atri
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Jan 22, 2016
Jan 22, 2016 at 3:18 PM UTC
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