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Fortunato, I am called. My friends rate me a connoisseur. Tonight I wear a jester’s garb for the feast day of misrule. Tonight is fine, the wine flows free With honeyed sweetness on my lips My headgear rings with happiness as I enjoy another sip.. Montresor came to speak with me He wore a mask and monkish gown. I shook the hand he offered me. We spoke about a cask of wine. A cask of sherry, dark and sweet Amontillado- so he claimed My friend had paid a premium. Wished me to judge and share his gain. He thought he’d ask Luchresi’s help But that man is no judge of wine. Give him grape juice in a cup And Luchresi would exclaim “How fine” I took his arm and off we went, Not knowing how this night would end. I went quite willing to my doom with this fiend I thought a friend. Montressor’s servants were away Leaving he and I alone He poured for me a warming glass then led me to the catacombs. We sampled others of his wines to keep the cold and damp away. I coughed and could not catch my breath. But from my goal could not be swayed. In the darkness of the tombs Among Montressor’s ancestral bones He victimized my drunkenness I found myself chained to the stones. I quickly learned it was no jest I screamed in vain- none heard my cry As he with brick and mortar built this prison tomb where I will die..
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Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 9:05 PM UTC
Amontillado
Fortunato, I am called. My friends rate me a connoisseur. Tonight I wear a jester’s garb for the feast day of misrule. Tonight is fine, the wine flows free With honeyed sweetness on my lips My headgear rings with happiness as I enjoy another sip.. Montresor came to speak with me He wore a mask and monkish gown. I shook the hand he offered me. We spoke about a cask of wine. A cask of sherry, dark and sweet Amontillado- so he claimed My friend had paid a premium. Wished me to judge and share his gain. He thought he’d ask Luchresi’s help But that man is no judge of wine. Give him grape juice in a cup And Luchresi would exclaim “How fine” I took his arm and off we went, Not knowing how this night would end. I went quite willing to my doom with this fiend I thought a friend. Montressor’s servants were away Leaving he and I alone He poured for me a warming glass then led me to the catacombs. We sampled others of his wines to keep the cold and damp away. I coughed and could not catch my breath. But from my goal could not be swayed. In the darkness of the tombs Among Montressor’s ancestral bones He victimized my drunkenness I found myself chained to the stones. I quickly learned it was no jest I screamed in vain- none heard my cry As he with brick and mortar built this prison tomb where I will die..
A retelling of Poe's classic tale from the victim's point of view.
john-f-mccullagh
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63/M/American
Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 9:05 PM UTC
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