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Success & Excess, the double-headed goliath atop the mountain drinking wine laughed with all the slop-eating swine at the ant-sized pilgrims crafting their shrine. But soon the mountain cracked under the lives spent toiling over construction & protection of their collective prison-- the bitter stench of cynicism wafted freely through its halls & prisoners prayed for the crumbling to bring them fresh air. The mountain did crumble, success & excess met pilgrims in fate as the trumpets of creation harmonized with the oboes of destruction to wring out a nocturne for the newly born babes. Cynicism dissipated & their souls grew stronger, their will followed & filled the void of Excess with imagination to create the world again. Success, the wounded foe, was forced to strut around town-- pilgrims & prisoners laughed and poked, yet at the nucleus, Success whispered: "nothing can stop me."
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Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 5:43 PM UTC
Success
Success & Excess, the double-headed goliath atop the mountain drinking wine laughed with all the slop-eating swine at the ant-sized pilgrims crafting their shrine. But soon the mountain cracked under the lives spent toiling over construction & protection of their collective prison-- the bitter stench of cynicism wafted freely through its halls & prisoners prayed for the crumbling to bring them fresh air. The mountain did crumble, success & excess met pilgrims in fate as the trumpets of creation harmonized with the oboes of destruction to wring out a nocturne for the newly born babes. Cynicism dissipated & their souls grew stronger, their will followed & filled the void of Excess with imagination to create the world again. Success, the wounded foe, was forced to strut around town-- pilgrims & prisoners laughed and poked, yet at the nucleus, Success whispered: "nothing can stop me."
3.23.10
travis-dixon
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Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 5:43 PM UTC
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