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The last time I saw you, Hope shown from your eyes, A smile lit your face and you were ready. The last words I heard from your mouth were “I love you”. I said them back as the elevator doors were closing. We smiled at each other and waved goodbye. When I heard you were gone the next morning My world stopped for a moment. There would be no hope for you now. But also no more pain. No more suffering. God had taken you home. I still miss you so much.
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Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 11:40 AM UTC
Carole
The last time I saw you, Hope shown from your eyes, A smile lit your face and you were ready. The last words I heard from your mouth were “I love you”. I said them back as the elevator doors were closing. We smiled at each other and waved goodbye. When I heard you were gone the next morning My world stopped for a moment. There would be no hope for you now. But also no more pain. No more suffering. God had taken you home. I still miss you so much.
My best friend, Carole, died November, 2004 after a short battle with pancreatic cancer. The night before she died, she was waiting to have a surgery which the doctors hoped would add a few months to her life. She died that night from a blood clot. I guess God had other plans.
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Dec 2, 2011
Dec 2, 2011 at 11:40 AM UTC
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