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*Whitman Revisited (Note: apologies to Walt Whitman.. this poem is metaphor for American/U.S. and not, as in Whitman’s classic poem “O’Captain, My Captain”, about Lincoln.) “O’Captain, O’Captain" the ship you sailed from port to port, its prize did surely win, but its sails were always blown by winds of war and sin. "O’Captain", your dreams were born of pure fantasy of myth to benefit a few, all was needed to see the truth was to take a whiff of stench in genocidal schemes turned into tears and screams, creating chaos and more from shore to shore. “O’Captain, O’Captain", your Yankee Clipper has won, a single flag was raised but never should be praised; from the Halls of Montezuma, to the shores of Tripoli, your bombs and drones and unjust wars have blown many Peoples away on every single shore. It’s called the good ship Manifest Destiny - it should sink and sail no more. Aztec Warrior 1.6.16*
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Jan 10, 2016
Jan 10, 2016 at 1:32 PM UTC
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*Whitman Revisited (Note: apologies to Walt Whitman.. this poem is metaphor for American/U.S. and not, as in Whitman’s classic poem “O’Captain, My Captain”, about Lincoln.) “O’Captain, O’Captain" the ship you sailed from port to port, its prize did surely win, but its sails were always blown by winds of war and sin. "O’Captain", your dreams were born of pure fantasy of myth to benefit a few, all was needed to see the truth was to take a whiff of stench in genocidal schemes turned into tears and screams, creating chaos and more from shore to shore. “O’Captain, O’Captain", your Yankee Clipper has won, a single flag was raised but never should be praised; from the Halls of Montezuma, to the shores of Tripoli, your bombs and drones and unjust wars have blown many Peoples away on every single shore. It’s called the good ship Manifest Destiny - it should sink and sail no more. Aztec Warrior 1.6.16*
Further Note: Walt Whitman was a wonderful poet, controversial in his views and style of poetry at the time, but Whitman saw Lincoln as a hero for uniting the states and ending “legal” slavery (though as history has shown, a different kind of slavery emerged after Reconstruction- share cropping. As stated in note above in beginning of poem, my use of Whitman’s poem is not about Lincoln, but is a metaphor for America/U.S. and it’s “myth” of the greatest country in the world and having a “special heritage”, “special people” and “destiny”. There are NO special people anywhere in the world. One of the best things to come out of the 60's was that for literally millions living here, began to understand that “American Lives Are Not More Important Than Anyone Else’s Lives.” And the politicians, and official spokes people hate us for it.
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Jan 10, 2016
Jan 10, 2016 at 1:32 PM UTC
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