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This astonishingly smart work by an enterprising bunch of greedy caterpillars on this tree, symbolizes sweet success itself (only to them, not for others I'll have to grudgingly accept) Look how they devour with a vengeance, every bit of the gentle greatness, one felt in presence of the exhilarating fine green crown, of the lovely tree that stood head held high, smiling  in scorching sun, storm and rain, and made me stand awe struck, for a while the first time I passed through the path under her thick canopy. Success has avariciously eaten up glory a fine creation of many seasons, without any concern for those who die for greatness, nothing else! All that remains to see is this: whether fragile winged butterflies, charm personified in vivid colors, would come out,of this greed? Though they being a creatures of transience makes it a bad bad bargain.
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Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 12:05 PM UTC
When success eats up the yen for greatness
This astonishingly smart work by an enterprising bunch of greedy caterpillars on this tree, symbolizes sweet success itself (only to them, not for others I'll have to grudgingly accept) Look how they devour with a vengeance, every bit of the gentle greatness, one felt in presence of the exhilarating fine green crown, of the lovely tree that stood head held high, smiling  in scorching sun, storm and rain, and made me stand awe struck, for a while the first time I passed through the path under her thick canopy. Success has avariciously eaten up glory a fine creation of many seasons, without any concern for those who die for greatness, nothing else! All that remains to see is this: whether fragile winged butterflies, charm personified in vivid colors, would come out,of this greed? Though they being a creatures of transience makes it a bad bad bargain.
In the hot pursuit of success who cares for greatness?
k-balachandran
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Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 12:05 PM UTC
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