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~~ First & Foremost ~~~ a friendly competition, not of erudition, more a contest of speedy eruption *who will be first, for quenching their thirst, on not any but only every, day of their togetherness, to declare, swear, affirm, that their love for the other is the greater* a race where both win, by crossing the ever-moving forward, the unfinished line a never static series, much more than merely being a claimant of a trite first place, more akin to momentarily being at the head of an unending mathematical progression, (1 + 1 > 2) solvable if and when leap frogging over each other, extending their combined reach *when one is first to pronounce this daily blessing at the beginning of the new awakening twenty four, of their joint custodied imprimatur, silently implied, I love you with a simple syrup summary* first and foremost one, if by pillowed whisper two, if by text *a succint messag to the other, their love is coming fresh direct, with an invading intensio, deserving recognition that a new edition will be published on this very day, with the same exact freshly steaming coffee'd, bannered headline, that my love for you, my darling sweetheart is* first and foremost condensing with a yellowing smiley face, in these illiterate days of emoticons, unacceptable, yellow carded, though summarizing acceptable as **F & F or 1st/most** formats that have been adjudged to be an A-Ok entry, in the contest without a foreseeable ending and *that no one, but only both, can possess the winning record* ~~~
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Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM UTC
F & F (1st/most)
~~ First & Foremost ~~~ a friendly competition, not of erudition, more a contest of speedy eruption *who will be first, for quenching their thirst, on not any but only every, day of their togetherness, to declare, swear, affirm, that their love for the other is the greater* a race where both win, by crossing the ever-moving forward, the unfinished line a never static series, much more than merely being a claimant of a trite first place, more akin to momentarily being at the head of an unending mathematical progression, (1 + 1 > 2) solvable if and when leap frogging over each other, extending their combined reach *when one is first to pronounce this daily blessing at the beginning of the new awakening twenty four, of their joint custodied imprimatur, silently implied, I love you with a simple syrup summary* first and foremost one, if by pillowed whisper two, if by text *a succint messag to the other, their love is coming fresh direct, with an invading intensio, deserving recognition that a new edition will be published on this very day, with the same exact freshly steaming coffee'd, bannered headline, that my love for you, my darling sweetheart is* first and foremost condensing with a yellowing smiley face, in these illiterate days of emoticons, unacceptable, yellow carded, though summarizing acceptable as **F & F or 1st/most** formats that have been adjudged to be an A-Ok entry, in the contest without a foreseeable ending and *that no one, but only both, can possess the winning record* ~~~
6:21am Jan. 9, 2016 nyc
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM UTC
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