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. . I ran my normal jog today Upon a crossing breeze This peace of Wind stopped on a dime I leaned against the trees The Wind then asked "Can I be seen?" Said "No, but KNOW you're there" The Wind replied "Are you so sure?" "Through Faith and not despair" _______________________________
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:10 PM UTC
The Wind ..................[a short poem about Faith]
. . I ran my normal jog today Upon a crossing breeze This peace of Wind stopped on a dime I leaned against the trees The Wind then asked "Can I be seen?" Said "No, but KNOW you're there" The Wind replied "Are you so sure?" "Through Faith and not despair" _______________________________
The poem is written in Common Meter;  mixed meter, where lines 1 & 3 are in Iambic Tetrameter and lines 2 & 4 are in Iambic Trimeter.   If one can read this poem to the beat of Iambic Prosody: e.g. S1, L1 i RAN my NOR-man JOG  to-DAY You might feel the wind, even think you see it.  Learning who the Wind was at one point changed my life for the better. I hope you enjoy.    Thomas Note:  Any critique is welcome
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:10 PM UTC
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