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I ran my normal jog today
Upon a crossing breeze
This peace of Wind stopped on a dime
I leaned against the trees
The Wind then asked "Can I be seen?"
Said "No, but KNOW you're there"
The Wind replied "Are you so sure?"
"Through Faith and not despair"
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:10 PM UTC
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I ran my normal jog today
Upon a crossing breeze
This peace of Wind stopped on a dime
I leaned against the trees
The Wind then asked "Can I be seen?"
Said "No, but KNOW you're there"
The Wind replied "Are you so sure?"
"Through Faith and not despair"
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The poem is written in Common Meter; mixed meter, where lines 1 & 3 are in Iambic Tetrameter and lines 2 & 4 are in Iambic Trimeter. If one can read this poem to the beat of Iambic Prosody:
e.g. S1, L1
i RAN my NOR-man JOG to-DAY
You might feel the wind, even think you see it. Learning who the Wind was at one point changed my life for the better.
I hope you enjoy. Thomas
Note: Any critique is welcome
