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**inspired by Lidi Minuet and her poem "HATCH"** I found an egg of crystal it had a little crack though beautiful as opals integrity it lacked I asked the Lord to help me "whatever should I do?" He told me to go and plant it when the day was new and so I looked for soil but no soft could be found so I planted my wee egg in hard, forbidding ground I watered it with tears for others suffering lack and after a little while the ground began to crack! a tentative green sprout pushed up its tender head it grew up from the rocky ground I had thought so dead! I continued watering I knew naught else to do and a tulip flower appeared the lightest eggshell blue! I watered then in earnest! I wanted for to see that flower strong and healthy and what it'd bloom to be! slowly the petals opened and lo! there fast emerged a'singing and a'fluttering a little crystal bird! out of the light blue flower the creature dipped and soared it was then I realized my hope had been restored! flying 'round my head its feathers sent off light as brilliant as a diamond shattering the night it was only then I realized as the darkness fell apart the soil was life's hardships and the egg had been my HEART SoulSurvivor (C) 12/17/2015
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:17 AM UTC
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**inspired by Lidi Minuet and her poem "HATCH"** I found an egg of crystal it had a little crack though beautiful as opals integrity it lacked I asked the Lord to help me "whatever should I do?" He told me to go and plant it when the day was new and so I looked for soil but no soft could be found so I planted my wee egg in hard, forbidding ground I watered it with tears for others suffering lack and after a little while the ground began to crack! a tentative green sprout pushed up its tender head it grew up from the rocky ground I had thought so dead! I continued watering I knew naught else to do and a tulip flower appeared the lightest eggshell blue! I watered then in earnest! I wanted for to see that flower strong and healthy and what it'd bloom to be! slowly the petals opened and lo! there fast emerged a'singing and a'fluttering a little crystal bird! out of the light blue flower the creature dipped and soared it was then I realized my hope had been restored! flying 'round my head its feathers sent off light as brilliant as a diamond shattering the night it was only then I realized as the darkness fell apart the soil was life's hardships and the egg had been my HEART SoulSurvivor (C) 12/17/2015
I know every trouble i experience now is nothing compared to the joy of God. I must remember that JOY is J esus O thers     Y ourself In just that order. PLEASE repost this piece if you will I'm proud of it it has a great message l think people should read! ~~~<♡>~~~
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Dec 17, 2015
Dec 17, 2015 at 6:17 AM UTC
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