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In the darkest of our valleys     By dark angels demented, ‘Twas once a regal temple -     Serene spring - tauntingly tormented. A Queen in her Domain,     It stood there! Under Lock and Chain;     A maiden so fair! Lavender curtains laden;     On this Temple may flow Along the Times of this Maiden -     In the ****** snow. And every gentle air in that field,     Of Doomsday, From the Black Rose’s shield -     Their aroma passed away. Witnessing this Ominous blolly;     Through luminous windows - Spirits sing in melancholy,     In the malicious meadows. Upon this throne I bore;     A tintinnabulation of air - Befitting glory’s chore,     Of this realm’s affair. With many a jewel gleaming,     Against the Temple door - The River’s light came beaming,     Sparkling for evermore. A troop of Angels; on their duty,     At my doorbell, sing - For the Silent beauty,     Who burdens the King. Then, the Reaper came,     Along the Temple’s River - For the distressed dame;     And the sorrows within her quiver. Above this temple of glory,     Sagacious scenes bloomed - Of the maiden’s story,     The clergy that loomed. Now; Within that valley -     Through the reddened windows see, Figures dancing delicately;     To her disbanded melody. The river - now a pale white,     Is her decor, Night’s sweetest silent fright -     And flows - Nevermore.
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Dec 14, 2015
Dec 14, 2015 at 4:13 PM UTC
The Maiden's Temple
In the darkest of our valleys     By dark angels demented, ‘Twas once a regal temple -     Serene spring - tauntingly tormented. A Queen in her Domain,     It stood there! Under Lock and Chain;     A maiden so fair! Lavender curtains laden;     On this Temple may flow Along the Times of this Maiden -     In the ****** snow. And every gentle air in that field,     Of Doomsday, From the Black Rose’s shield -     Their aroma passed away. Witnessing this Ominous blolly;     Through luminous windows - Spirits sing in melancholy,     In the malicious meadows. Upon this throne I bore;     A tintinnabulation of air - Befitting glory’s chore,     Of this realm’s affair. With many a jewel gleaming,     Against the Temple door - The River’s light came beaming,     Sparkling for evermore. A troop of Angels; on their duty,     At my doorbell, sing - For the Silent beauty,     Who burdens the King. Then, the Reaper came,     Along the Temple’s River - For the distressed dame;     And the sorrows within her quiver. Above this temple of glory,     Sagacious scenes bloomed - Of the maiden’s story,     The clergy that loomed. Now; Within that valley -     Through the reddened windows see, Figures dancing delicately;     To her disbanded melody. The river - now a pale white,     Is her decor, Night’s sweetest silent fright -     And flows - Nevermore.
This is based on "The Haunted Palace" by Edgar Allan Poe, although Poe told the story of a king who eventually met his demise, his castle eventually becoming haunted by the phantoms of his family. Instead, I told the story of a woman who locked herself away from society - and speaks of how the outside world seems to her.
Charlotte-huston
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Dec 14, 2015
Dec 14, 2015 at 4:13 PM UTC
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