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Thanksgiving Menu Planning for Gaining and Losing ~~~ having shed thirty pounds plus, another X more yet required, to be forever properly de-cored, a happy subtracted scoring part too, brought the curtain going down on a seven year insanity, paid off the forever divorcing ***** that weight worth more than a Venetian pound of flesh now finding myself in a re-entry orbit, though hardly gliding, encased in a capsule, friction glowing gold the now never~ending calorie counting and exercise rituals, in every aspect of life, all friendly devils of relentless, demanding utter devotions, all watching, wondering, watering, endlessly, a new perennial flowering of a leaf, all watchdogs of the truth serum called what if? what if had I lived my prior lazy loose life, with the current rigor of daily barefaced truth I would never have made choices that have redline scarred, some made back in 1975, into a forty year losing war, spiral declination that permitted the insidious, slo-mo of decay, that could be, would be, reversed only by this recent heart and soul surgery *nowadays, menu plan my life's every actionable choice, limiting the sugared foolishness from the decay one can coat themselves in, survival lies and refrigerator drugs, until sleep~rest intervenes what shall I eat, what shall I choose, what will be this day's life choices from the menu, answering daily inquiries from Oliver and Siri (1), acknowledging that more-than-occasional slippage will occur, but taking no true satisfaction from the periodicself-cheating, always daily weigh myself twice, first my body, then, my soul, upon the rising, upon the setting* ***to see quantifiable what I have, thankfully  yet to gain by losing*** ~~~ Thanksgiving Day 2015
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Nov 26, 2015
Nov 26, 2015 at 3:14 PM UTC
Thanksgiving Menu Planning for Gaining and Losing
Thanksgiving Menu Planning for Gaining and Losing ~~~ having shed thirty pounds plus, another X more yet required, to be forever properly de-cored, a happy subtracted scoring part too, brought the curtain going down on a seven year insanity, paid off the forever divorcing ***** that weight worth more than a Venetian pound of flesh now finding myself in a re-entry orbit, though hardly gliding, encased in a capsule, friction glowing gold the now never~ending calorie counting and exercise rituals, in every aspect of life, all friendly devils of relentless, demanding utter devotions, all watching, wondering, watering, endlessly, a new perennial flowering of a leaf, all watchdogs of the truth serum called what if? what if had I lived my prior lazy loose life, with the current rigor of daily barefaced truth I would never have made choices that have redline scarred, some made back in 1975, into a forty year losing war, spiral declination that permitted the insidious, slo-mo of decay, that could be, would be, reversed only by this recent heart and soul surgery *nowadays, menu plan my life's every actionable choice, limiting the sugared foolishness from the decay one can coat themselves in, survival lies and refrigerator drugs, until sleep~rest intervenes what shall I eat, what shall I choose, what will be this day's life choices from the menu, answering daily inquiries from Oliver and Siri (1), acknowledging that more-than-occasional slippage will occur, but taking no true satisfaction from the periodicself-cheating, always daily weigh myself twice, first my body, then, my soul, upon the rising, upon the setting* ***to see quantifiable what I have, thankfully  yet to gain by losing*** ~~~ Thanksgiving Day 2015
(1) Oliver Sacks http://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2015/08/the-oliver-sacks-reading-list/401993/ Siri my watchwoman, counter of the calories, chider of the foolishness, unafraid to question everything, reminding me to be ever thankful
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Nov 26, 2015
Nov 26, 2015 at 3:14 PM UTC
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