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i) moving a couch: our labour pained by darkened skies. ii) smoky room and the long long couch -- freshly moved, a multi-hued curvy affair of fabrics, orange & salmon my old man, the artist & i all sit, cigarettes between fingers talking. gives us two paintings, his, for the help. sitting in the livingroom now while they talk & looking out onto the street clicking a lamp on & off. two girls see the light blinking, look up, wave for me. so i go down the steps and they ask if i know the artist. if i paint?? "i play with words." --won't i please read them something?? having moved the couch just then, i read them "couch" -- poem of the summer previous (furniture on the brain?) wringing their hands they use words like great ! enveloping ! eclectic pittr-patt'ring of your words ! -- at this turn away, quoting b. dylan: "it's very tiring having other people tell you how much they dig you." instead of standing in the doorway offer to buy them                       coffee. (they greedily accept sans even a blink -- the leeches!) make 'em wait while i light another cigarette. & once in cafe they don't have much of interest to say so i take my cup and go sit on the artist's roof.          dig that           sunset ! ...
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Dec 23, 2011
Dec 23, 2011 at 4:46 PM UTC
moving a couch (haiku & in the artist's apt.)
i) moving a couch: our labour pained by darkened skies. ii) smoky room and the long long couch -- freshly moved, a multi-hued curvy affair of fabrics, orange & salmon my old man, the artist & i all sit, cigarettes between fingers talking. gives us two paintings, his, for the help. sitting in the livingroom now while they talk & looking out onto the street clicking a lamp on & off. two girls see the light blinking, look up, wave for me. so i go down the steps and they ask if i know the artist. if i paint?? "i play with words." --won't i please read them something?? having moved the couch just then, i read them "couch" -- poem of the summer previous (furniture on the brain?) wringing their hands they use words like great ! enveloping ! eclectic pittr-patt'ring of your words ! -- at this turn away, quoting b. dylan: "it's very tiring having other people tell you how much they dig you." instead of standing in the doorway offer to buy them                       coffee. (they greedily accept sans even a blink -- the leeches!) make 'em wait while i light another cigarette. & once in cafe they don't have much of interest to say so i take my cup and go sit on the artist's roof.          dig that           sunset ! ...
two for de price of 1
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32/M/Canadian
Dec 23, 2011
Dec 23, 2011 at 4:46 PM UTC
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