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- 1 - *a therapeutic calm wafted across the valley and a wispy mist in blue filled the still air i stood transfixed on the tense river bank seeing and not believing this magical sight that on my mind weren't ever a blight                                - 2 - a frog with a bobbing throat leapt into the water and sent a ripple that crept up the serene pond till in time it reached the floater of my line whereupon i felt a grip upon my timid heart and a fish bigger than in stories broke the surface                               - 3- in that mystical moment the scales fell from my eyes and i beheld a sight most wondrously mesmerizing for there upon a delicate water lily in ballerina pose was a maid with a beauty that no artist could conceive in a soon forgotten sluggish million years or more                            - 4 - her eyes were like twinkling stars recently escaped from the whirling depths of a cosmic wormhole her nose was like a bridge to whimsical fantasy and she beckoned to me with ever-increasing urgency till i felt my will melt before her seductive wiles                            - 5 - then the voice of my mother called me from the edge and the sleep induced by the moment began to dissipate the maid began a dance like one for her nuptials and the sound of distant drums bore into my soul in faint echoes that were forever sinking into endless time                             - 6 - as in a surrealistic dream before the break of another day the frog leapt out of the pond and onto the grassy bank from the lily, like a fancy, the dancing maid disappeared and there was neither mist nor breeze as i stood there alone again with my fishing line and my baffled thoughts*
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Nov 22, 2015
Nov 22, 2015 at 3:16 AM UTC
maid on a water lily
- 1 - *a therapeutic calm wafted across the valley and a wispy mist in blue filled the still air i stood transfixed on the tense river bank seeing and not believing this magical sight that on my mind weren't ever a blight                                - 2 - a frog with a bobbing throat leapt into the water and sent a ripple that crept up the serene pond till in time it reached the floater of my line whereupon i felt a grip upon my timid heart and a fish bigger than in stories broke the surface                               - 3- in that mystical moment the scales fell from my eyes and i beheld a sight most wondrously mesmerizing for there upon a delicate water lily in ballerina pose was a maid with a beauty that no artist could conceive in a soon forgotten sluggish million years or more                            - 4 - her eyes were like twinkling stars recently escaped from the whirling depths of a cosmic wormhole her nose was like a bridge to whimsical fantasy and she beckoned to me with ever-increasing urgency till i felt my will melt before her seductive wiles                            - 5 - then the voice of my mother called me from the edge and the sleep induced by the moment began to dissipate the maid began a dance like one for her nuptials and the sound of distant drums bore into my soul in faint echoes that were forever sinking into endless time                             - 6 - as in a surrealistic dream before the break of another day the frog leapt out of the pond and onto the grassy bank from the lily, like a fancy, the dancing maid disappeared and there was neither mist nor breeze as i stood there alone again with my fishing line and my baffled thoughts*
david-mungoshi
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Nov 22, 2015
Nov 22, 2015 at 3:16 AM UTC
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