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this critic is awkward, sees the good, feels the grace. how to say it, that the mind wanders, that filth detracts from the everyday. that stitching can be rhythmic, and never mind the capitals. clever words confound, googling interupts the flow whilst dots are alaways useful. i have never done this before. sbm.
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Nov 16, 2015
Nov 16, 2015 at 1:32 AM UTC
. the critic .
this critic is awkward, sees the good, feels the grace. how to say it, that the mind wanders, that filth detracts from the everyday. that stitching can be rhythmic, and never mind the capitals. clever words confound, googling interupts the flow whilst dots are alaways useful. i have never done this before. sbm.
sonja-benskin-mesher
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Nov 16, 2015
Nov 16, 2015 at 1:32 AM UTC
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