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Once upon a time, I met a girl. Now, I'm certainly no geologist, but I can definitely say she rocked my world. So much so, that I may need to see a psychologist. This girl was beautiful from head to toe. Not just because of aspects like personality or aesthetics, but because she continued to fight her internal foe. The kind of ceaseless beauty not found in cosmetics. Sadly, she cannot seem to see herself as I do - shrugging off compliments or scoffing in disbelief. She struggles every moment of ever day, yet there is one I rue: The moment she convinces herself death is the only relief.
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Nov 12, 2015
Nov 12, 2015 at 2:27 PM UTC
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Once upon a time, I met a girl. Now, I'm certainly no geologist, but I can definitely say she rocked my world. So much so, that I may need to see a psychologist. This girl was beautiful from head to toe. Not just because of aspects like personality or aesthetics, but because she continued to fight her internal foe. The kind of ceaseless beauty not found in cosmetics. Sadly, she cannot seem to see herself as I do - shrugging off compliments or scoffing in disbelief. She struggles every moment of ever day, yet there is one I rue: The moment she convinces herself death is the only relief.
Title is a pun on "relief"
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Nov 12, 2015
Nov 12, 2015 at 2:27 PM UTC
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