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A view of you only these eyes can see, As lungs do fill and fall, to give and bring, New life to me, as dreams may hear me sing. But just for now, enamoured hope runs free. Two destined paths amalgamate as we, Plunge into bold, foolhardy happenings. Le grande cascade. Vintgar. A constant spring, That never stops sprouting abundantly. But hurried mornings twist and bend my heart, To expedite the time I must derail My consciousness and fall back to the start, To dreams of distance lost so I can't fail. To find my thrill, admiring breath, like art; The rise and fall of life and it's details.
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Nov 12, 2015
Nov 12, 2015 at 3:19 AM UTC
Lungs
A view of you only these eyes can see, As lungs do fill and fall, to give and bring, New life to me, as dreams may hear me sing. But just for now, enamoured hope runs free. Two destined paths amalgamate as we, Plunge into bold, foolhardy happenings. Le grande cascade. Vintgar. A constant spring, That never stops sprouting abundantly. But hurried mornings twist and bend my heart, To expedite the time I must derail My consciousness and fall back to the start, To dreams of distance lost so I can't fail. To find my thrill, admiring breath, like art; The rise and fall of life and it's details.
My first sonnet (Petrarchan) so hopefully the form is on point :)
eliza_blooms
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Nov 12, 2015
Nov 12, 2015 at 3:19 AM UTC
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