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Empty. His life His spirit His future Empty. He undertook redemption at 9:44 PM The world would forgive a sin that made it a better place.
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Nov 12, 2011
Nov 12, 2011 at 2:05 AM UTC
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Empty. His life His spirit His future Empty. He undertook redemption at 9:44 PM The world would forgive a sin that made it a better place.
This poem was written as part of the Adopt a Metaphor project. The metaphor adopted here was "undertook redemption".
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Nov 12, 2011
Nov 12, 2011 at 2:05 AM UTC
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