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Little has been made Of the hurtling calendar. Countless days masturbated Into oblivion. I'm supposed to Have my life together, Like all my accomplished Peers who are doing Well for themselves, Bachelor degrees and Promising careers, Absolutely deserving Of envious applause From a coddled child Who has yet to evolve into A fully functional adult. (c) 2015 Brandon Antonio Smith
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Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 10:53 PM UTC
You Still Haven't Grown
Little has been made Of the hurtling calendar. Countless days masturbated Into oblivion. I'm supposed to Have my life together, Like all my accomplished Peers who are doing Well for themselves, Bachelor degrees and Promising careers, Absolutely deserving Of envious applause From a coddled child Who has yet to evolve into A fully functional adult. (c) 2015 Brandon Antonio Smith
The third and fourth line in the first stanza was a response from my friend Little Raven.
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Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 10:53 PM UTC
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