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. •up the wall... he wou- ld climb every  night again and again... • every time he did, to the bottom he would fall•fortunately aid came quickly to where  he had lain... • on handsome horses, sat  men moustach- ed and tall  •   overhead the moon cried sullen and grim•*oh why  does he always par- take in such foolish endeavour?*•the men hurr- ied back on thundering  hooves to save him •he laid motionless  awaiting to be put toge- ther•"we're the same,  both ellipses, she and i" •same words he would repeatedly mutter •*"to be closer to her I will always try•only then she would know that forever i'll be falling for her"*• **IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII |-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------| |--|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|---| |-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------| |--|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|---|** .
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Dec 6, 2015
Dec 6, 2015 at 11:26 AM UTC
The Great Fall
. •up the wall... he wou- ld climb every  night again and again... • every time he did, to the bottom he would fall•fortunately aid came quickly to where  he had lain... • on handsome horses, sat  men moustach- ed and tall  •   overhead the moon cried sullen and grim•*oh why  does he always par- take in such foolish endeavour?*•the men hurr- ied back on thundering  hooves to save him •he laid motionless  awaiting to be put toge- ther•"we're the same,  both ellipses, she and i" •same words he would repeatedly mutter •*"to be closer to her I will always try•only then she would know that forever i'll be falling for her"*• **IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII |-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------| |--|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|---| |-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------| |--|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|-------|---|** .
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Dec 6, 2015
Dec 6, 2015 at 11:26 AM UTC
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