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. *• fes- tooned against the canvas of night •your efforts would reach but it's just too far•you twinkle the hardest...despite• being crowded by the other stars•at times i see you faltering dim•you fight to conserve what fuel you've left to burn•as you feel the encroaching void from uni- verse's rim•keep    twinkling for only time...will                                  tell what's left t-                                                  o learn• •                                                                        •* .
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Dec 8, 2015
Dec 8, 2015 at 11:20 AM UTC
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. *• fes- tooned against the canvas of night •your efforts would reach but it's just too far•you twinkle the hardest...despite• being crowded by the other stars•at times i see you faltering dim•you fight to conserve what fuel you've left to burn•as you feel the encroaching void from uni- verse's rim•keep    twinkling for only time...will                                  tell what's left t-                                                  o learn• •                                                                        •* .
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Dec 8, 2015
Dec 8, 2015 at 11:20 AM UTC
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