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He was like reading a book at the kitchen table, while waiting for the kettle to boil, and the blinds letting in just enough light as to not disturb the cat (if you have a cat) in its peaceful slumber on the counter, next to the flowers you have set out. That overwhelming sense of home before the eeriness of too much silence crept up on you, and you’d have to move because suddenly the air no longer held the serene feeling it had only a moment ago. He was danger. But you loved it. Because he kept you on edge, that alert he made you feel. Your sudden awareness to everything. He made you feel so ******* alive. But he leaves, almost too quickly. Like sunlight behind the clouds, and as abrupt as the screeching of steam as water boils. And you realize he doesn’t quite feel the same way you do
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Nov 4, 2015
Nov 4, 2015 at 9:47 PM UTC
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He was like reading a book at the kitchen table, while waiting for the kettle to boil, and the blinds letting in just enough light as to not disturb the cat (if you have a cat) in its peaceful slumber on the counter, next to the flowers you have set out. That overwhelming sense of home before the eeriness of too much silence crept up on you, and you’d have to move because suddenly the air no longer held the serene feeling it had only a moment ago. He was danger. But you loved it. Because he kept you on edge, that alert he made you feel. Your sudden awareness to everything. He made you feel so ******* alive. But he leaves, almost too quickly. Like sunlight behind the clouds, and as abrupt as the screeching of steam as water boils. And you realize he doesn’t quite feel the same way you do
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Nov 4, 2015
Nov 4, 2015 at 9:47 PM UTC
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