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Auntie met her friend Milly in Milly's place at the other side of the barrack grounds and she took me along not wanting (or maybe willing) to leave me behind with the black mutt back at her place sit down Eileen I'll get us tea and biscuits o fine Auntie said did Benny want a drink? Milly asked would you like a drink Benny? Auntie asked have you lemonade? I asked Milly said no but she had orange juice the stuff you can give babies but it's good stuff Milly said I said that'd be good her daughter Elsie came in to the room straight faced carrying a doll by the neck (motherly kid) hello Elsie Auntie said hello Elsie replied and walked to her mother and took hold of her skirt are you shy? Auntie asked the kid said nothing but stared at me with her beady eyes Elsie Eileen asked you a question it is rude not to answer Milly said not shy Elsie replied her eyes not leaving me I looked at the doll (slowly being strangled) it had a dull pink dress on and little else its hair was yellowy dull and matted nice doll I said Elsie looked at me deeper and said her name's Miss White why Miss White? I asked because she is white Elsie said or pink I said Auntie and Milly talked over by the oven where Milly was stirring something she's white Elsie said my dad brought it back from Germany is it a German doll? I asked no she said glumly it's China and looked at her mother by the oven o I said can I play with it? no she said get your own doll she hugged her doll tighter to her chest I don't want a doll I just want to play with your doll I said well you can't she said o right I said 4 year old boys don't play with dolls they play with guns and toy soldiers and such stuff she said have you got any guns or toy soldiers? I asked no she said and walked away and that was me done for for the day.
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Oct 29, 2015
Oct 29, 2015 at 4:29 AM UTC
AT MILLY'S PLACE 1951
Auntie met her friend Milly in Milly's place at the other side of the barrack grounds and she took me along not wanting (or maybe willing) to leave me behind with the black mutt back at her place sit down Eileen I'll get us tea and biscuits o fine Auntie said did Benny want a drink? Milly asked would you like a drink Benny? Auntie asked have you lemonade? I asked Milly said no but she had orange juice the stuff you can give babies but it's good stuff Milly said I said that'd be good her daughter Elsie came in to the room straight faced carrying a doll by the neck (motherly kid) hello Elsie Auntie said hello Elsie replied and walked to her mother and took hold of her skirt are you shy? Auntie asked the kid said nothing but stared at me with her beady eyes Elsie Eileen asked you a question it is rude not to answer Milly said not shy Elsie replied her eyes not leaving me I looked at the doll (slowly being strangled) it had a dull pink dress on and little else its hair was yellowy dull and matted nice doll I said Elsie looked at me deeper and said her name's Miss White why Miss White? I asked because she is white Elsie said or pink I said Auntie and Milly talked over by the oven where Milly was stirring something she's white Elsie said my dad brought it back from Germany is it a German doll? I asked no she said glumly it's China and looked at her mother by the oven o I said can I play with it? no she said get your own doll she hugged her doll tighter to her chest I don't want a doll I just want to play with your doll I said well you can't she said o right I said 4 year old boys don't play with dolls they play with guns and toy soldiers and such stuff she said have you got any guns or toy soldiers? I asked no she said and walked away and that was me done for for the day.
A 4 YEAR OLD BOY AND HIS AUNTIE'S FRIEND IN 1951
TerryCollett
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Oct 29, 2015
Oct 29, 2015 at 4:29 AM UTC
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