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Where did you go? I thought lifting up A box searching, Searching; for time They said X would mark Where I could find Her heart resting Right next to mine But mine is me And me not you So she and me Can be the only two
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Nov 3, 2011
Nov 3, 2011 at 6:38 PM UTC
A Confusion of Pronouns
Where did you go? I thought lifting up A box searching, Searching; for time They said X would mark Where I could find Her heart resting Right next to mine But mine is me And me not you So she and me Can be the only two
Each stanza's syllables add up to 17. I did this because 17 is a prime number and can only be divided by one. The feeling of being alone or the number one is expressed more thoroughly this way.
nicholas-rew
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Nov 3, 2011
Nov 3, 2011 at 6:38 PM UTC
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