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No tribal scarring marks your face no cinder walk or thorn-pierced tongue to prove you are no longer young but fit to take your rightful place Your generation never fought And you have wished that you could see the selfless, brave camaraderie of which you were so often taught Alas for you to fetch ashore when we had lost our appetite for making children go and fight and briefly grieved, and said "No more!" Condemning you, unreconciled, to shed no blood, as real men should; to feel that life is mostly good Oh foolish knave!  Oh hopeless child! And saddled with this gross mistake your quiet kindness gently spread and harmless fascinations fed and left no corpses in their wake To think we looked to one unmanned as children, hungry for a clue of what it's right for men to do, led, blind, by your unbloodied hand Sought thoughts from one who could not brag of marching forth to suicide for waxed moustaches' sense of pride Nor bleeding dry beneath a flag But you had naught to tell us, save that life is hopeful and sublime and we should use this precious time And I'll be grateful to the grave.
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Nov 1, 2011
Nov 1, 2011 at 4:20 PM UTC
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No tribal scarring marks your face no cinder walk or thorn-pierced tongue to prove you are no longer young but fit to take your rightful place Your generation never fought And you have wished that you could see the selfless, brave camaraderie of which you were so often taught Alas for you to fetch ashore when we had lost our appetite for making children go and fight and briefly grieved, and said "No more!" Condemning you, unreconciled, to shed no blood, as real men should; to feel that life is mostly good Oh foolish knave!  Oh hopeless child! And saddled with this gross mistake your quiet kindness gently spread and harmless fascinations fed and left no corpses in their wake To think we looked to one unmanned as children, hungry for a clue of what it's right for men to do, led, blind, by your unbloodied hand Sought thoughts from one who could not brag of marching forth to suicide for waxed moustaches' sense of pride Nor bleeding dry beneath a flag But you had naught to tell us, save that life is hopeful and sublime and we should use this precious time And I'll be grateful to the grave.
alan-mcclure
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Scottish
Nov 1, 2011
Nov 1, 2011 at 4:20 PM UTC
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