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The uninitiated pandering to the lowest common denominator, the clean cut ************ in sophomoric rhetoric, "Sick" he says, "Addicted" he says, Like, "I haven't seen the girl I have a crush on in almost 24 hours and I feel.......like...... Withdrawing. Itchy, Nauseous, Angry, Vomiting, Like I've got insects EVERYWHERE, MY BODY IS THE ENEMY, OPEN REVOLT OF THE AFFECTED CELLS, (THEY'RE ALL AFFECTED BY NOW) There is no escape there is no relief there is nothing to be done but wait it out, One day clean, Two days clean, Three days clean, Maybe, this will pass, NO IT WILL NOT Four days later, a glimpse, relapse, progress undone, back to 0, the sickness is inevitable, I'm going to die like this" When was the last time you looked into the ravenous ****** eyes of the masses, and what did you learn from this? Not enough Grow up.
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Oct 14, 2015
Oct 14, 2015 at 12:05 AM UTC
The Metaphor of the Disease
The uninitiated pandering to the lowest common denominator, the clean cut ************ in sophomoric rhetoric, "Sick" he says, "Addicted" he says, Like, "I haven't seen the girl I have a crush on in almost 24 hours and I feel.......like...... Withdrawing. Itchy, Nauseous, Angry, Vomiting, Like I've got insects EVERYWHERE, MY BODY IS THE ENEMY, OPEN REVOLT OF THE AFFECTED CELLS, (THEY'RE ALL AFFECTED BY NOW) There is no escape there is no relief there is nothing to be done but wait it out, One day clean, Two days clean, Three days clean, Maybe, this will pass, NO IT WILL NOT Four days later, a glimpse, relapse, progress undone, back to 0, the sickness is inevitable, I'm going to die like this" When was the last time you looked into the ravenous ****** eyes of the masses, and what did you learn from this? Not enough Grow up.
tyler-king
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Oct 14, 2015
Oct 14, 2015 at 12:05 AM UTC
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