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its a cigarette singeing the fingertips sirens crying to a deaf ear a hammer smashed against necrotic flesh can’t you feel that? you are a wind that rails against the moon: thousands of miles away she cannot hear and cannot feel you she can see but never touch *how do i feel after so much disaster? what world could we have? what could we be?* old callouses thicken and spread but the blood inside is dead and the feeling fades pressing again draws no special ache *bruises blooming like lies from your lips like nightshade in the dark* tell me the truth that i might feel the wind the burn, the pain, the blood. chip off the callouses and expose my skin melt my heart to feel your infirmity or else entomb me in the stone of my own making.
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Oct 9, 2015
Oct 9, 2015 at 6:09 PM UTC
can't you feel that?
its a cigarette singeing the fingertips sirens crying to a deaf ear a hammer smashed against necrotic flesh can’t you feel that? you are a wind that rails against the moon: thousands of miles away she cannot hear and cannot feel you she can see but never touch *how do i feel after so much disaster? what world could we have? what could we be?* old callouses thicken and spread but the blood inside is dead and the feeling fades pressing again draws no special ache *bruises blooming like lies from your lips like nightshade in the dark* tell me the truth that i might feel the wind the burn, the pain, the blood. chip off the callouses and expose my skin melt my heart to feel your infirmity or else entomb me in the stone of my own making.
i love most of the words in this. whether or not i like their order or the sum of their parts is another thing entirely.
beth-ivy
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Oct 9, 2015
Oct 9, 2015 at 6:09 PM UTC
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