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And when it is over and finally the last of the ashes float into the sea the sky clears blue concave lens through which I cannot see here I will breathe as if underwater oxygenated flow over gills I don't need to understand bathed of muddy ash supplied with what I need I think these things    as prayers....   grey flecks         swirling down             around me
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Sep 30, 2015
Sep 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM UTC
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And when it is over and finally the last of the ashes float into the sea the sky clears blue concave lens through which I cannot see here I will breathe as if underwater oxygenated flow over gills I don't need to understand bathed of muddy ash supplied with what I need I think these things    as prayers....   grey flecks         swirling down             around me
hilo-shaka
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Sep 30, 2015
Sep 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM UTC
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