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what a terrifying and illogical extreme to love someone without fear the girl of your wildest dreams who you may never be able to hold dear for she does not know you exist she does not know of your love she sees the world with closed fists and heart is empty of she may never accept what you have even if it does shine ever so bright to her you are only a young lad yet you know you are a lad with some fight you were never limited by a clock or what was known to be acceptable stronger than a diamond in a rock even if your ending would be quite terrible she never digs for your treasure for in her tower she kept waiting no matter how grand your gesture she still needs some wall breaking still you love her with a love so pure illogical, terrifying, fearless captivatingly obscure you will forever love her the fiercest
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Sep 28, 2015
Sep 28, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
Ivory walled tower
what a terrifying and illogical extreme to love someone without fear the girl of your wildest dreams who you may never be able to hold dear for she does not know you exist she does not know of your love she sees the world with closed fists and heart is empty of she may never accept what you have even if it does shine ever so bright to her you are only a young lad yet you know you are a lad with some fight you were never limited by a clock or what was known to be acceptable stronger than a diamond in a rock even if your ending would be quite terrible she never digs for your treasure for in her tower she kept waiting no matter how grand your gesture she still needs some wall breaking still you love her with a love so pure illogical, terrifying, fearless captivatingly obscure you will forever love her the fiercest
This idea is so abstract and raw in my head. I wasn't quiet sure how to form it into proper words so I decided to try putting it into a rhyme scheme. If ever I do get around to finishing this idea, I will fix this poem.
patricia-arches
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Sep 28, 2015
Sep 28, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
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