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A hitch hiker sits atop his Battered leather suitcase Layered with the stickers of Each and every one of his destinations Creating some kind of scaly hide For that dead container He drags with him always. His head’s hung towards his shoes Or what’s left them And his right arm is propped up on his Knee, with the thumb outstretched Just resting along the on ramp for I-76 The only thing that he wants is help And the only help he’s had is the cool breeze That follows the cars passing him But just as he begins to fear heat stroke Or sever hallucinations brought on by dehydration A battered GM pickup slows to a stop on the Gravel next to the ramp. He has to rub his eyes to make sure this Isn’t some sort of delirium Then hefts his suitcase and rushes towards The rusting pickup The owner has one of those John Deer caps Tipped up on his forehead and a rolled Cigarette hanging from his lips He doesn’t even bother to look at His new guest he just stares intently at the Wheel. “Thank you sir for the ride, I wasn’t sure if Anyone out here even cared about people Looking to make a new start.” The drivers head just hangs limp But the corner of his mouth curls up And he responds, “Some of us ‘round here We just want a good ending. Something To light up the eyes.” Then gravel sprays. Our traveler holds his suitcase on his lap Both fists gripping the worn handle Just beneath his chin And his mind it worries over this Unusual character with whom he’s Now trapped. Still focused intently on the road These two travel alone in silence Finally the man with the John deer cap Turns his head and quietly asks “Do you believe in God?” “It depends on what you call belief I guess” The passengers’ wary response While the smile on the drivers face widens And he continues “He has a plan for all of us Whether we like it or not He got some great idea or mission That we were intended to complete.” The passenger just stares for a moment Wondering if the man will continue Then he feels it’s safe to speak and says “That’s what those guys who wear robes say That there is some divine goal assigned to each Of us Just sometimes I wonder what mine is.” The man finally turns his head And stares at his new guest “Oh he, he has a plan for you He wouldn’t have had me find you If he didn’t. Would you believe me if I told you He commanded me to stop for you?” “This I find hard to believe, All I’m doing is looking for someplace To start over To not be judged For my past.” At this point the passenger noticed that His driver hadn’t looked back To the road “He will forgive and you won’t Be judged. All you need do is ask.” Still staring dead at the man “I will ask in my own time What I’ve done is between me And God.” Hoping he would turn his head “Oh yes, what you’ve done He told me this too You’re a liar, and a thief Not a major sinner But in need of atonement.” Still staring at the man And there was a turn coming It looked like there was a ravine Just past the rail “Yes you need to repent and Beg the Lord for forgiveness! You humble fools think he is kind But this is only for the deserving! This God is cruel and he feels as if there Are other gods in your pitiful life And he is vindictive!” The truck was gaining speed “Thank you sir for this conversation But I’m ready to get out.” Hand tugging on the latch But it won’t open “Oh, he has a plan.” And the laughter starts While the truck runs forward And the door won’t open The passenger starts to Swing for the driver But somehow he can’t reach him Then the inevitable collision Sounds And the vehicle is weightless For just a moment. Hanging from the rear view mirror Is a rosary looking suspended in mid air The passenger reaches out for it And the truck collides with the earth The world spinning is merely a blur While the sounds of metal twisting Fills the air And The hitchhikers’ eyes snap wide And he’s sitting on his suitcase Along the on ramp for I-76 with His thumb outstretched And his head hung towards his feet. But clenched in the fist with the thumb Protruding is a string of rosary Beads with the cross dangling And at his feet is an oily John Deer Cap In the distance the old man wheezes “Oh, he has a plan.”
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Oct 23, 2011
Oct 23, 2011 at 7:55 AM UTC
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A hitch hiker sits atop his Battered leather suitcase Layered with the stickers of Each and every one of his destinations Creating some kind of scaly hide For that dead container He drags with him always. His head’s hung towards his shoes Or what’s left them And his right arm is propped up on his Knee, with the thumb outstretched Just resting along the on ramp for I-76 The only thing that he wants is help And the only help he’s had is the cool breeze That follows the cars passing him But just as he begins to fear heat stroke Or sever hallucinations brought on by dehydration A battered GM pickup slows to a stop on the Gravel next to the ramp. He has to rub his eyes to make sure this Isn’t some sort of delirium Then hefts his suitcase and rushes towards The rusting pickup The owner has one of those John Deer caps Tipped up on his forehead and a rolled Cigarette hanging from his lips He doesn’t even bother to look at His new guest he just stares intently at the Wheel. “Thank you sir for the ride, I wasn’t sure if Anyone out here even cared about people Looking to make a new start.” The drivers head just hangs limp But the corner of his mouth curls up And he responds, “Some of us ‘round here We just want a good ending. Something To light up the eyes.” Then gravel sprays. Our traveler holds his suitcase on his lap Both fists gripping the worn handle Just beneath his chin And his mind it worries over this Unusual character with whom he’s Now trapped. Still focused intently on the road These two travel alone in silence Finally the man with the John deer cap Turns his head and quietly asks “Do you believe in God?” “It depends on what you call belief I guess” The passengers’ wary response While the smile on the drivers face widens And he continues “He has a plan for all of us Whether we like it or not He got some great idea or mission That we were intended to complete.” The passenger just stares for a moment Wondering if the man will continue Then he feels it’s safe to speak and says “That’s what those guys who wear robes say That there is some divine goal assigned to each Of us Just sometimes I wonder what mine is.” The man finally turns his head And stares at his new guest “Oh he, he has a plan for you He wouldn’t have had me find you If he didn’t. Would you believe me if I told you He commanded me to stop for you?” “This I find hard to believe, All I’m doing is looking for someplace To start over To not be judged For my past.” At this point the passenger noticed that His driver hadn’t looked back To the road “He will forgive and you won’t Be judged. All you need do is ask.” Still staring dead at the man “I will ask in my own time What I’ve done is between me And God.” Hoping he would turn his head “Oh yes, what you’ve done He told me this too You’re a liar, and a thief Not a major sinner But in need of atonement.” Still staring at the man And there was a turn coming It looked like there was a ravine Just past the rail “Yes you need to repent and Beg the Lord for forgiveness! You humble fools think he is kind But this is only for the deserving! This God is cruel and he feels as if there Are other gods in your pitiful life And he is vindictive!” The truck was gaining speed “Thank you sir for this conversation But I’m ready to get out.” Hand tugging on the latch But it won’t open “Oh, he has a plan.” And the laughter starts While the truck runs forward And the door won’t open The passenger starts to Swing for the driver But somehow he can’t reach him Then the inevitable collision Sounds And the vehicle is weightless For just a moment. Hanging from the rear view mirror Is a rosary looking suspended in mid air The passenger reaches out for it And the truck collides with the earth The world spinning is merely a blur While the sounds of metal twisting Fills the air And The hitchhikers’ eyes snap wide And he’s sitting on his suitcase Along the on ramp for I-76 with His thumb outstretched And his head hung towards his feet. But clenched in the fist with the thumb Protruding is a string of rosary Beads with the cross dangling And at his feet is an oily John Deer Cap In the distance the old man wheezes “Oh, he has a plan.”
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Oct 23, 2011
Oct 23, 2011 at 7:55 AM UTC
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