I can take a breath
but can't live my life
I am confused I am dead or alive 

I have lots of things to do 
will you please give some rest 
I am now too tired 
will you please clean up my bed

I want to see the moon 
the clouds are dark 
now its going to rain 
can I now see it clear 

I have lots of dream 
will you please give me prefect night 
I need to see my dreams 
will you please make me alive

sumina-thapaliya

Take a breath

Jun 4, 2026

June 2026

2026

Anger & Conflict - June 2026

Beauty & Aesthetics - June 2026

Dark & Scary - June 2026

Death & Mortality - June 2026

Drama & Tragedy - June 2026

Family & Relationships - June 2026

Fantasy & Magical - June 2026

Happiness & Joy - June 2026

Heartbreak & Loss - June 2026

Historical & Ancient - June 2026

Hope & Optimism - June 2026

Humor & Satire - June 2026

Inspiration & Motivation - June 2026

Love & Romance - June 2026

Mystery & Supernatural - June 2026

Nature & Environment - June 2026

Philosophical & Intellectual - June 2026

Political & Social - June 2026

Sadness & Melancholy - June 2026

Sexy & Sensual - June 2026

Time & Nostalgia - June 2026

Transformation & Change - June 2026

War & Heroism - June 2026

World & Travel - June 2026

removed.-dh8k

Cannot make you live but can love your poems

jessica-packer

saugat-upadhyay

nice one...dogma between life and death...

lily-mae

Beautiful poetry... Sometimes all we need is a little bit of love and peace.... we can make that little slice go a long way...xo

marvin-m-brato

Many can relate to this poem, amazing write!

drprernasingla

wow beautiful write. I can very much relate to it.

removed.l-7

keith-edward-baucum

Atul

Ironically, I'm the 69th person to like this piece!

jpki

Sometimes, life seem to be like dead, but lot of emotion run in spite of these, you enter a new world and emotion flows in the way of poem. neatly pictured. Great