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When l inhale, there is something inside me, growing like a garden flower, the sweet air l breath, its spreading over the ribs, the fresh air feels like Eden,  maybe its love ,   sprinkled from your inner  heart  to  my  being. When  i inhale, there is a place l feel  like  l am in, full of beautiful dreams and visions , cant u hear the lovely songs l feel , l have already  started to walk  ahead  of my dreams, giving pleasure to every lovely vision, flying without win  maybe its your heart a place of my imagination . When l inhale, l feel like you were there to gimme breath, holding my ribs when l breath out, feeling  the soft  touch of your hands, and your kisses  on  my  neck, being  my inhaler  when l am suffocating,      making my dream complete,      thus you sitting  on my  lap to eternity.
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 4:15 AM UTC
Dreams unforetold
When l inhale, there is something inside me, growing like a garden flower, the sweet air l breath, its spreading over the ribs, the fresh air feels like Eden,  maybe its love ,   sprinkled from your inner  heart  to  my  being. When  i inhale, there is a place l feel  like  l am in, full of beautiful dreams and visions , cant u hear the lovely songs l feel , l have already  started to walk  ahead  of my dreams, giving pleasure to every lovely vision, flying without win  maybe its your heart a place of my imagination . When l inhale, l feel like you were there to gimme breath, holding my ribs when l breath out, feeling  the soft  touch of your hands, and your kisses  on  my  neck, being  my inhaler  when l am suffocating,      making my dream complete,      thus you sitting  on my  lap to eternity.
Aldreen-Takudzwa
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 4:15 AM UTC
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