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You go on your own But you don't want to Its crowded and loud And the groaning and moaning Only serves to dishearten you You're told that is good to go But the pain your body feels Tells you that's not so You can leave if you want But you don't want to appear weak When you finally decide to quit Your body beaten down and sore There is no sense of accomplishment Just the nagging pain in your limbs That tells you you can't take much more You shuffle your feet As you head to the door Trying not to show any pain And concentrating on not falling to the floor As you get into your car And wonder, Why did I join a gym?
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Feb 2, 2010
Feb 2, 2010 at 6:17 PM UTC
Unmotivated Pain
You go on your own But you don't want to Its crowded and loud And the groaning and moaning Only serves to dishearten you You're told that is good to go But the pain your body feels Tells you that's not so You can leave if you want But you don't want to appear weak When you finally decide to quit Your body beaten down and sore There is no sense of accomplishment Just the nagging pain in your limbs That tells you you can't take much more You shuffle your feet As you head to the door Trying not to show any pain And concentrating on not falling to the floor As you get into your car And wonder, Why did I join a gym?
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Feb 2, 2010
Feb 2, 2010 at 6:17 PM UTC
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