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i dont care about wine or succulent dinners that take two hours to prepare and are diamonds on the tongue i dont care about cigarettes in the morning blinking swollen eyelids and hair like long grass combed by seabreath i dont care about fabric on the walls, the colors that warm your irises when the aging sun hits them just right i dont care about apartments with high ceilings and balconies overlooking streets that teem with noise from the underground teem with people enjoying this centuries version of peace i dont care about thirty two hour weeks and paychecks that coat life in a thick layer of oil i care about cereal in coffee mugs, smiles rested on top and eyes whispering i care about voices strung together like morning dew, trembling along a spider’s thread i care about watching one another make art, in silence, fingers spiraling down the brittle neck of a grandfather guitar rainbow splatter words with hands.
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Feb 2, 2010
Feb 2, 2010 at 11:21 AM UTC
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i dont care about wine or succulent dinners that take two hours to prepare and are diamonds on the tongue i dont care about cigarettes in the morning blinking swollen eyelids and hair like long grass combed by seabreath i dont care about fabric on the walls, the colors that warm your irises when the aging sun hits them just right i dont care about apartments with high ceilings and balconies overlooking streets that teem with noise from the underground teem with people enjoying this centuries version of peace i dont care about thirty two hour weeks and paychecks that coat life in a thick layer of oil i care about cereal in coffee mugs, smiles rested on top and eyes whispering i care about voices strung together like morning dew, trembling along a spider’s thread i care about watching one another make art, in silence, fingers spiraling down the brittle neck of a grandfather guitar rainbow splatter words with hands.
gabrielle-f
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Feb 2, 2010
Feb 2, 2010 at 11:21 AM UTC
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