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I broke the beer bottle as a metaphor for my emotions--                      the realization she was leaving setting in. There was nothing romantic between us. Just a friendship-- two people, sharing dead seal dark humor & common hatred of being idle. She stayed in the hospital with me after someone added something "special" to my drink. We'd only met five hours prior. You can't find that type of karmic green kindness laying idly on a sidewalk or in the mall. If only she weren't such an uppity ***** I'd miss her even more. I'd be at her goodbye party right now, sharing bourbons and yucking it up. But she makes me feel so ******* uneasy-- hence, I'm staying here, drinking craft beer and honoring her friendship by a pouring one out.
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Jan 6, 2012
Jan 6, 2012 at 2:09 PM UTC
Leaving
I broke the beer bottle as a metaphor for my emotions--                      the realization she was leaving setting in. There was nothing romantic between us. Just a friendship-- two people, sharing dead seal dark humor & common hatred of being idle. She stayed in the hospital with me after someone added something "special" to my drink. We'd only met five hours prior. You can't find that type of karmic green kindness laying idly on a sidewalk or in the mall. If only she weren't such an uppity ***** I'd miss her even more. I'd be at her goodbye party right now, sharing bourbons and yucking it up. But she makes me feel so ******* uneasy-- hence, I'm staying here, drinking craft beer and honoring her friendship by a pouring one out.
I've been working on this one for a while.
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Jan 6, 2012
Jan 6, 2012 at 2:09 PM UTC
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