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I am torn between cookies and cream or raisin and ***    you have plumped    for a vivid blue creation it’s bubblegum    you say as it begins to drip    down your fingers and I’m dawdling so it’s raisin and *** then two magnolia spheres    glittering in the sun and we walk down the street with cold tongues
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Sep 3, 2015
Sep 3, 2015 at 2:15 PM UTC
Raisin and ***
I am torn between cookies and cream or raisin and ***    you have plumped    for a vivid blue creation it’s bubblegum    you say as it begins to drip    down your fingers and I’m dawdling so it’s raisin and *** then two magnolia spheres    glittering in the sun and we walk down the street with cold tongues
Written: September 2015. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, similar in vein to my previous piece 'Jam and Toast' - a poem supposed to highlight how very small things can cheer someone up. A link to my Facebook writing page is on my homepage here on HP. Feedback always appreciated. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP in the coming months.
reece-aj-chambers
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Sep 3, 2015
Sep 3, 2015 at 2:15 PM UTC
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