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"The ambiguous intensity of looking someone in the eye, which can feel simultaneously invasive and vulnerable." Invasive? Doesn't a deep gaze carry numerous hooks disguised as unpretentious interrogation marks? They're faster than the blink of the eyelids, ambitiously break into the one in front, stealing something not for sale in the first place. But, you just wanted to know ...just wanted to know that sparkling little piece of life behind the curtains of the iris Then you suddenly find yourself apologizing It was not your intention to set your noxious questions free, hooks of someone else's life Vulnerable? You smell the eyes in front of you, You see they can effortlessly listen to your thoughts, which have been screaming anyway, from the windows, of your soul. Even those ignored little parts insist on showing off You can almost physically feel it, streams of dense water travelling from the very core of your cells, going up your veins, holding your breath for a second when passing through your throat, until it finally reaches your pupils' edge, where they can bluster it out and it's gone! You're left with the hope that the eyes in front of you haven't seen the spectacle.
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Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 6:24 PM UTC
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"The ambiguous intensity of looking someone in the eye, which can feel simultaneously invasive and vulnerable." Invasive? Doesn't a deep gaze carry numerous hooks disguised as unpretentious interrogation marks? They're faster than the blink of the eyelids, ambitiously break into the one in front, stealing something not for sale in the first place. But, you just wanted to know ...just wanted to know that sparkling little piece of life behind the curtains of the iris Then you suddenly find yourself apologizing It was not your intention to set your noxious questions free, hooks of someone else's life Vulnerable? You smell the eyes in front of you, You see they can effortlessly listen to your thoughts, which have been screaming anyway, from the windows, of your soul. Even those ignored little parts insist on showing off You can almost physically feel it, streams of dense water travelling from the very core of your cells, going up your veins, holding your breath for a second when passing through your throat, until it finally reaches your pupils' edge, where they can bluster it out and it's gone! You're left with the hope that the eyes in front of you haven't seen the spectacle.
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31/Brazilian
Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 6:24 PM UTC
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