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i think i need to move to outer space spacing myself further from the human race racing away at an astonishing pace pacing myself toward stars of grace gracing me with a solitary place placing me within the galaxy's trace tracing my roots in a self finding chase chasing comets to see my own face
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Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 4:29 PM UTC
chasing comets - double quantum loop poem
i think i need to move to outer space spacing myself further from the human race racing away at an astonishing pace pacing myself toward stars of grace gracing me with a solitary place placing me within the galaxy's trace tracing my roots in a self finding chase chasing comets to see my own face
a double quantum has rhymes in the first and last words of each line, besides the first line...also, the last word of each line must be used as the first word in the next line, but in a different form
GaryL
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54/M/American
Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 4:29 PM UTC
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