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PART TWO: Open your eyes it's much safer Before walking to a ditch deep As the depth of hell The world is not a horror It is for we make it one Put on your torches And light your way out The smallest of situations Lead us to fear Back to the dark And in the ditch we go Each lesson is a mark And step to mature The needle and thread Never mends the broken heart The pieces missing do Put back to their spaces That whistle endless with the wind As it passes swiftly through Judging us as heartless And empty bottle ******* Ignorance and neglect we walk with As for we cannot see it For we refuse to open our eyes Neither follow the light At the end of the dark Out of the fear Of failure and understanding Of the misjudged world Hard to accept the truth From the ones who see In the dark we build a World of imagination Only to find we cannot Co-op with the world As our corpses Are closed into darkness For an eternity Unable to fight out of the dark As the light fades away And wish we grabbed the chance To success A WISE WORD TO THE WORLD I SAY.....TO LISTEN ©Hansmind, 2015
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Aug 23, 2015
Aug 23, 2015 at 8:02 AM UTC
A WISE WORD TO THE WORLD
PART TWO: Open your eyes it's much safer Before walking to a ditch deep As the depth of hell The world is not a horror It is for we make it one Put on your torches And light your way out The smallest of situations Lead us to fear Back to the dark And in the ditch we go Each lesson is a mark And step to mature The needle and thread Never mends the broken heart The pieces missing do Put back to their spaces That whistle endless with the wind As it passes swiftly through Judging us as heartless And empty bottle ******* Ignorance and neglect we walk with As for we cannot see it For we refuse to open our eyes Neither follow the light At the end of the dark Out of the fear Of failure and understanding Of the misjudged world Hard to accept the truth From the ones who see In the dark we build a World of imagination Only to find we cannot Co-op with the world As our corpses Are closed into darkness For an eternity Unable to fight out of the dark As the light fades away And wish we grabbed the chance To success A WISE WORD TO THE WORLD I SAY.....TO LISTEN ©Hansmind, 2015
PART TWO  as promised. a continuation of part one. Plus a special thanks to all viewers and enjoy the poem and Thank you.
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Aug 23, 2015
Aug 23, 2015 at 8:02 AM UTC
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