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welcome to the drowning valley. we do not live; we exist. her legs stopped working months ago. now she drags herself onward through the floating, bloating bones. she forgot what she was looking for years, decades, centuries ago, and time drags on without her. nir leaden lungs drag nir down. air might as well be metal for all the good it does. (nir breath moves slow, hissing.) ne is not yet drowning, but the watchers do not help nir swim. he gave in lifetimes past, but they will not let him die, so he stares at the sightless sky, observing it more dispassionately than it studies him. they watch with a curious passion. rulers need not be dictators or cruel. to be detached is just as simple. and they watch the people existing in the drowning valley.
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Aug 20, 2015
Aug 20, 2015 at 10:02 AM UTC
the drowning valley
welcome to the drowning valley. we do not live; we exist. her legs stopped working months ago. now she drags herself onward through the floating, bloating bones. she forgot what she was looking for years, decades, centuries ago, and time drags on without her. nir leaden lungs drag nir down. air might as well be metal for all the good it does. (nir breath moves slow, hissing.) ne is not yet drowning, but the watchers do not help nir swim. he gave in lifetimes past, but they will not let him die, so he stares at the sightless sky, observing it more dispassionately than it studies him. they watch with a curious passion. rulers need not be dictators or cruel. to be detached is just as simple. and they watch the people existing in the drowning valley.
(i have literally no idea what this is)
glassea
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Aug 20, 2015
Aug 20, 2015 at 10:02 AM UTC
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