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come escape these pictures with me, these photographs sinuous and sinful, tenuous and tendrils creeping i feel you slipping slow away i wish i remembered the taste of your lips, the crackle of sparks between us that first time like the crunch of dried leaves underfoot that september losing time losing my summer spent under telephone poles and high voltage wires loving you losing light daybreak won’t come tonight and if i shout out loud nobody will be listening missing you and if in our short embrace we find hearts of gold enmeshed as one we take the time and celebrate sweaty, entangled in your bed your mother in the room upstairs try to be quiet, we cannot shout this magic we’re creating could not hold itself together losing time, losing my summer spent under telephone poles, high voltage wires loving you losing light, daybreak won’t come tonight and if i shout out loud no one will and no one can be listening, please be listening… we’re comparing what we could have to a dream that we have lost frosted over outside like dead dead water in your swimming pool in the dead of winter dead and buried, dead and gone, dead so long the worms have taken you home like the leaves that embraced you the night it was all stolen away. … losing time, losing my summer spent under telephone poles high voltage wires loving you losing light, daybreak won’t come tonight, no it won’t and if i shout out loud it won’t bring it back …whatever we may come to find let it be right
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Aug 16, 2015
Aug 16, 2015 at 5:30 PM UTC
vesper for the lost summer
come escape these pictures with me, these photographs sinuous and sinful, tenuous and tendrils creeping i feel you slipping slow away i wish i remembered the taste of your lips, the crackle of sparks between us that first time like the crunch of dried leaves underfoot that september losing time losing my summer spent under telephone poles and high voltage wires loving you losing light daybreak won’t come tonight and if i shout out loud nobody will be listening missing you and if in our short embrace we find hearts of gold enmeshed as one we take the time and celebrate sweaty, entangled in your bed your mother in the room upstairs try to be quiet, we cannot shout this magic we’re creating could not hold itself together losing time, losing my summer spent under telephone poles, high voltage wires loving you losing light, daybreak won’t come tonight and if i shout out loud no one will and no one can be listening, please be listening… we’re comparing what we could have to a dream that we have lost frosted over outside like dead dead water in your swimming pool in the dead of winter dead and buried, dead and gone, dead so long the worms have taken you home like the leaves that embraced you the night it was all stolen away. … losing time, losing my summer spent under telephone poles high voltage wires loving you losing light, daybreak won’t come tonight, no it won’t and if i shout out loud it won’t bring it back …whatever we may come to find let it be right
alternate second verses from live performances include: "i peeled back all that i had felt for you and threw it back in your face but things got hard, and i moved on while you stayed in place i can't atone for behavior controlled and i can't make sense of this disaster" also has appeared as 'black vesper' while performing as summer coalition this was one i wrote june 2010 and has since become one of my most played pieces on guitar. so much emotion and so much pain went into every single word.
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Aug 16, 2015
Aug 16, 2015 at 5:30 PM UTC
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