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I knocked at Hannah's door her mother opened it and I asked if Hannah was in she looked at me as if I'd suggested something impolite Hannah th' boy's haur she bellowed over her shoulder I took in her fiery eyes and turbaned head her dark hair tucked away beneath Hannah came to the door where shall we go she asked so I can tell Maw? What about Bermondsey docks I can show you my school then see Tower Bridge? We're gonnae see Tower Brig Hannah said to her mother awe rite be cannie her mother replied so we walked off from her flat and got a bus to Bermondsey (my mother had given me coins she was a kind soul) sitting together in the front watching the scenes go by nothing spectacular just London sights and people passing and vehicles going by we held hands moving to the motion of the bus her hand was warm our fingers entwined once we arrived I showed her my school (she went to a girls' school nearer to home her mother insisting no boys) it looks a bit Dickensian Hannah said it is and even the teachers are old as grime she laughed and we walked on to see Tower Bridge and walked across to the other side then had pop drinks in a small cafe and shared a slice of cake and sat and talked I don't think your mother likes me I said o she doesn't like males full stop not just you Benedict men ur blecht she tells me and my dad what's that mean? I asked her means men are a blight like a disease she laughed and sipped her tea I sipped mine smiling away hoping that she (like her mother Mrs Scot) never included me.
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Aug 1, 2015
Aug 1, 2015 at 2:56 AM UTC
HANNAH AND TOWER BRIDGE 1960
I knocked at Hannah's door her mother opened it and I asked if Hannah was in she looked at me as if I'd suggested something impolite Hannah th' boy's haur she bellowed over her shoulder I took in her fiery eyes and turbaned head her dark hair tucked away beneath Hannah came to the door where shall we go she asked so I can tell Maw? What about Bermondsey docks I can show you my school then see Tower Bridge? We're gonnae see Tower Brig Hannah said to her mother awe rite be cannie her mother replied so we walked off from her flat and got a bus to Bermondsey (my mother had given me coins she was a kind soul) sitting together in the front watching the scenes go by nothing spectacular just London sights and people passing and vehicles going by we held hands moving to the motion of the bus her hand was warm our fingers entwined once we arrived I showed her my school (she went to a girls' school nearer to home her mother insisting no boys) it looks a bit Dickensian Hannah said it is and even the teachers are old as grime she laughed and we walked on to see Tower Bridge and walked across to the other side then had pop drinks in a small cafe and shared a slice of cake and sat and talked I don't think your mother likes me I said o she doesn't like males full stop not just you Benedict men ur blecht she tells me and my dad what's that mean? I asked her means men are a blight like a disease she laughed and sipped her tea I sipped mine smiling away hoping that she (like her mother Mrs Scot) never included me.
A GIRL AND BOY IN LONDON IN 1960 GO SEE TOWER BRIDGE
TerryCollett
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Aug 1, 2015
Aug 1, 2015 at 2:56 AM UTC
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