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breathing, still breathing, *in and out,in and out, in and ------- out* cliffhanging loud beats *one, two, one,        two, one    and two* pulsating pace, closing time cold fingers, toes, neck dried pale kisser buried irises, fluttering lids *in and            out, in and ------- out one, two, one, one and two* knocked out, shut down paralyzed, stunned, running out blood, there's blood somewhere, everywhere, all around open skin, trembling wrist blood, there's blood *in and              out, in and out, in and ------ out one, two, one,                  two, one and two* lights out, lights back on, phone ringing, door slamming sirens coming mother, screaming diluted sounds, distant thoughts *in and out,                       in and out, in and ------* still alive, still alive              still                alive           still - i smile
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Jul 29, 2015
Jul 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM UTC
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breathing, still breathing, *in and out,in and out, in and ------- out* cliffhanging loud beats *one, two, one,        two, one    and two* pulsating pace, closing time cold fingers, toes, neck dried pale kisser buried irises, fluttering lids *in and            out, in and ------- out one, two, one, one and two* knocked out, shut down paralyzed, stunned, running out blood, there's blood somewhere, everywhere, all around open skin, trembling wrist blood, there's blood *in and              out, in and out, in and ------ out one, two, one,                  two, one and two* lights out, lights back on, phone ringing, door slamming sirens coming mother, screaming diluted sounds, distant thoughts *in and out,                       in and out, in and ------* still alive, still alive              still                alive           still - i smile
a new piece for an old habit... triggering, but please don't succumb into it. please.
qua-patet-orbis
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Jul 29, 2015
Jul 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM UTC
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