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These whitewashed walls scream out my discontent, The faces of inmates line the corridors, impassive and unimpressed, I bang on steel locker doors, but I hardly make a dent, My words are not replied to, and my screams go answered, It doesn't matter though, they are silent screams of aid, They resound through these hallways like the echoes of a gale, The cold of locker steel is an ever foreboding constant. They line the hallways, like the vigilant sentinels of a jail, And I can help but think, how familiar the two seem to be, And how in one a perfect illusion is created, of being free, These whitewashed walls are filled to the brim, With students and inmates, angels and demons alike, Teachers and wardens stalk these halls, hidden behind their hollow faces, Bullies and inmates swarm these halls, hidden behind unfamiliar faces, In these whitewashed walls, there are blackened souls and empty holes, Holes where hearts used to be, and coal where souls used to be, These whitewashed walls are alive, and they bear witness to it all, And here these whitewashed walls remain, through our rise and our fall.
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Jul 28, 2015
Jul 28, 2015 at 7:46 PM UTC
These Whitewashed Walls
These whitewashed walls scream out my discontent, The faces of inmates line the corridors, impassive and unimpressed, I bang on steel locker doors, but I hardly make a dent, My words are not replied to, and my screams go answered, It doesn't matter though, they are silent screams of aid, They resound through these hallways like the echoes of a gale, The cold of locker steel is an ever foreboding constant. They line the hallways, like the vigilant sentinels of a jail, And I can help but think, how familiar the two seem to be, And how in one a perfect illusion is created, of being free, These whitewashed walls are filled to the brim, With students and inmates, angels and demons alike, Teachers and wardens stalk these halls, hidden behind their hollow faces, Bullies and inmates swarm these halls, hidden behind unfamiliar faces, In these whitewashed walls, there are blackened souls and empty holes, Holes where hearts used to be, and coal where souls used to be, These whitewashed walls are alive, and they bear witness to it all, And here these whitewashed walls remain, through our rise and our fall.
This poem was to try and show the similarity between school and prison by gross exaggeration. Leave a comment on how it can be improved. I'm open to criticism.
ebo-sackey
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Jul 28, 2015
Jul 28, 2015 at 7:46 PM UTC
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